I read its MTL. Good story. Ending is a bit rushed. Not a wholesome or satisfactory ending. It was good till mid story but after that it was a gigantic mess. A lot of things were not explained.
So far, so good, love ma a Anti Hero mc ?, I love forward to seeing how the mc developes in the future, the pacing is also pretty good so far. Keep it up
I guess it’s interesting? we will see if it fall or land or fly to the heavens and become a new star for us. i read the intro just now and from it i can conclude as the wise sage the MC will die many times.
the integrated story line and plot is amazing.unclear links are present but that may be due to the novel being at the beginning stages and the story just unwrapping.main character profile is good but too much focus on multiple powers in my opinion rather than an overall powerful power however that is just the writers perspective and i respect that since he is the one developing the story.a further stable show of power between the system and mageroth will be much more pleasurable for the readers to have a good buildup
The main character is a bit of a jerk.He appears to be a show off in the series who is a good for nothing without the system.He has excessive pride but the story is still a good read after reading plenty worse
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This is exactly what a reader dreams of, a story that they can live and breathe in. Feel the tension and turmoil, the bliss and the love. The story progresses nicely and the characters are beautifully written. LOVE IT!
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I is good but need a little bit to get perfectIt's a great story but it's a bit hard to get at first but all I needed to do was going through it two times and then I got what it was about
Lol I just kept refreshing the page and watched the chapters disappear more and more. But anyways it was fun while it lasted wished you didn't just randomly drop it when I thought it was a good story but oh well good luck in your future endeavors.
Great novel, very good, it may be a little confusing but I managed to understand some parts, it is just info dumping but it's a good novel, check it out