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the story is actually fine, read other reviews for that. This is a review on webnovel. WHY THE FRICK WOULD YALL CHOOSE A BOOK WITH a GRAND TOTAL of 1 VOTES!!! WTHECK WEBNOVEL!
It’s a great novel, interesting idea, good story background, better then average character descriptions and great writing quality the only complaint is that there so much more chapters on p-a-t-r-e-o-n then here and I’m broke but besides that it’s a great story so far, I hope it will continue to be great. ?????
Faceslapping is an art, which this author isn’t too skill at. A proper faces lap Requires a setup. First the MC has to provoke criticism. The critism has to have cetwin validity and has some actual negative effect on the mc. Then the mc has to show that the critism is wrong.Unfortunsteely, this MC shows that the crprism about him is correct. Just that he kills all his critice in sneak attacks.
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It really isn’t that bad compared to other major racist and nationalistic novels. The only thing the novel that is bad is that Japan has poor security. Like have you seen the mythological something gene novel. Other than that the novel seems pretty interesting ofc 40 chapters isnt enough to tell if its good or not
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I love how you can expand to another story for this universe. Your writing is great and your story has peaked my interest. Hope you can keep updating the story frequently ?.
It was good at first, but then it fell apart. Plot holes are a dime a dozen. I drop this. Without kara will be good fanfiction. And what about madara…. it was bad
Now I have only read the first segment of the book so I have not seen how your skills have progressed but for the whole werewolf thing (like descriptions or actions like instead of ‘furry hand in his chest’ something like ‘clawed fist thrusted through his chest’ ect) i would suggest you used more violent, beast like description and maybe look at some books of the genre.
I would suggest looking at the book on this site beast: reborn and although your books may lack the same themes (like how in that book werewolves are more ‘beast than man’ and yours seem to be more human) it is a godo source of inspiration and werewolf-y, I would also suggest looking at the latter chapters since once apon a time that author was also unskilled.
And finally thank you for all of your hard work and I might have said too much (if you haven’t guessed) i’m very passionate when it comes to wolves (especially books about werewolves).
Pilot read failed not alot of people read the Pilot so they cancelled the novel.
Common grammatical errors, that author refuses to fix, stating no one is paying him to fix them so he wont. I cant force him to fix it, but i can give a bad review