This review is an extremely biased review. Read with caution. "System" is there so I gave it a 5 star. I LOVE SYSTEMS. I SHALL READ ALL SYSTEMS. ALL SYSTEMS SHALL GAIN 5 stars.. sorry got excited lol .. well yea. basically, its a system. :/
read till ch124great novel op mc and funny too and doesn't go on killing every protagonists not that there are many of them in the first place the family of mc is in the mid tier just below the royals nothing obvious to complain about quite good novel
This one is called 'Heavenly Dao List' and is absolutely good novel and I really enjoyed reading it, u can read the raw novel on (Mtlnovels).
I wasn't expecting anything tbh since I've read too many novels already. I won't say its completely New as I don't know every existing novel but it's a breath of fresh air to me and I would absolutelty recommend it
Its really rare to find good stuff in between the 95% of trash on this site, so im happy to proclaim this Novel a gem in the making. Sadly only 14 Chapters are out so far ... but hey, keep up the great work Author!
read till the latest chapter... and I have many problem with this story and how the author wrote it...okay, first let's start with something that I like about this story1. I like the concept about combined story of culinary world and underground world2. I like the harem development3. Ming Ming is cuteand here is what I didn't like about the story1. story development, till the latest chapter I read (title:dummy daddy) I barely see any development of the story on the area of cooking or the underground. on the chef or cooking plot, we only read about how MC can cooking a really good food, luckily got rich friend that let him "borrow" the restaurant, and sell the food there, and conveniently his rich friend have rich uncle that help MC promote his restaurant... he want to expand his restaurant so buying few store, and currently randomly got selected to participate in cooking competition... there is barely any development, morever it lack on the food department, the variety of the food, the description, and the feeling of passion in cooking... I think author need to read more about cooking story so that he know what I mean... for the part of underground, the development is a bit better, I'll talk what I hate in this part on point 2.2. the MC is stupid and all the character here is stupid. on the underground part, the MC already got harassed and attacked many time by Houzi Gang, and he did nothing to protect his business and close one, whrn he is close with the girls, finally he think about protecting them and suddenly he want to control the leader of the gang, like... WTF, I got really irritated by this because of MC stupidity, he doesn't have anything he can do to control the gang boss, how? and he really acted on it, and a stupid plot that made me want to throw my phone happen... sigh... finally he got lucky shot and killed the boss and this shit "snake without head" got mentioned a lot, is the MC really think that metaphor is a real thing? till one of his girlfriend got kidnapped and almost got raped by those "snake without head"...3. the plot that the author wrote for the face slapping element is really bad... it feels forced and unrealisric and the ending/conclusions/punishment is not satisfying...4. I feel really uncomfortable when reading the story, the plot is too thick and there is a little room for reader to rest...5. I hate when author randomly put torture scenehere is what I yhink you should do author:1. made the characters less stupid, you can start it by thinking "will people in real life do it"2. you should do more research on cooking story, not about the cooling but how the author of cooking story convey things and how they made their story insteresting3. when you want to write face slap, make the conclusion or punishment satisfying. when someone slap you, you want to slap the one that slapped you harder right? so you should made the conclussion or punishment bigger than the set up...4. make a space... make the story in arc so that the plot is not a mess right now, this is really important so the plot in your story will not be extra tick like now, so your reader can have a time to rest...for example in arc 1, make the set up, make the problem, and make the problem bigger, a solustion and ths conclusion and repeat it on arc 2, 3, 4, 5.....5. convey feelings, not telling plots. you need to know what feeling you want to convey in each word, sentence, paragraph, and chapter, and also think will your reader feel the same or not...6. understand your target reader, wrote what they like and don't wrote what they hate, you can research this by reading story of the same genre. btw this point is not absolute, you can adapt it into what you want to write and combine it with what your reader like and dislike to make your own decision...
Hey, ever wonder what its like to see the MC be a fatty despairing for a girlfriend? Well you’ve come to the right book.This fatty realized his desires upon death and was gifted with a chance to go after them.No more shy guy, as this fatty uses the system given to work towards such a goal.From fat to flat, from starving artist to leonardo de vinci.Come watch this journey with an old man, for with the tasks this system gives will have you both rolling and thankful you are not him.Kudos on the translation to get across the great humor, and maintaining stable updates.The pace of the story isn’t the fastest, nor exactly slow either. Its just right to flesh out the accompanying characters alongside the MC.Perhaps the only tank in ratings would be world building as things are very centralized at this point in the story. Definitely a more modern setting comedy story based around slice of life, so no harsh critique from the world building perspective here.
Don’t easily trust reviews on here. It’s a decent story, likeable characters, but also illogical plot. The writer will make your brain fry with overload of information, I’m speechless. It could be explain in a cool fun way, but it’s trying to explain it in a intellectual “geeky” sci-fi way. There’s also some heavy flaws, if the MC was that smart to begin with what the hell was the point of this System?! I had to drop it since my head hurt, will pick it up again when the Romance starts, I love the heroine but she might not even get scenes. It started off good and I love how different route the Author is going at all this, but I’m not sure what I’m reading anymore Lol
I wasn't going to do a review because it feels like cheating but all the others writers say they did it so here I am. I was surprised by how many people were interest in this strange story I came up with to join the competition. I didn't even get it out in time too enter so I had written it off. Yet now it's way more popular then Iron Will Reaches the Heaven which was the story I wanted to write most. This gives me mixed feeling but I'm glad people are enjoying this. I literally have no plan and am just making it up as I go for this one. Please stick with me on this unusual adventure!
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Aurthor writing is just like a vergin **** who always thinks about sex and story of his own without proper plots. All his chapters either filled with his sex thoughts or about unnessery thinking. Like a child got some grate candy and just want to show of.
We have so few sports related novels being translated, but tbh, the synopsis for this one was disappointing. Hopefully it’s just the synopsis that’s bad. I’ll delete this review if it turns out better than expected.