Some stories are eternal, and while writers don’t necessarily repeat them word-for-word through the generations, they are capable of crafting compelling echoes that evoke both the time we’re in and the universal emotional constants of humanity. Evoking that sense of universality...
If you want to read this novel these are the things that you should be aware.Misspelling ~ It would have been ok if there were only a few misspelled words but there to many that you would have to reread the sentence to understand it.Grammar ~ Along with misspelled words are sentence that is hard to understand because the grammar is messed up.Fighting Scene ~ Just skip the fight scene. It's like a 3 yrs old kid playing fights with his toys.Story ~ Just give up!And my most hated thing about this novel is:It's Premium ~ I don't know what made the author thinks that this will is worth the premium but for me it's a waste of "Fast Pass". Don't bother spending your FP, if you want to read this novel just wait until it's unlock. It's not worth it!**: this my opinion and Review!!
I like this novel but translation was a major quizz for me. Hope it get picked and please stick with the tag no harem or the story may sound more ridiculous like every novel. I really love the story with this system which is compatible.
If you are going to be a dicck about it.. Go on.. Saying that the author's writing is worse than a kid... Saying MC is being Dumb. Broken English.. collection of words... Calling this novel trash..You fu×k×rs have not even read 50 chps and start reviewing this reading 2 to 10 chaps..Every body started feeling like they are the great reviewers of all time..putting **** out there... For all of those who reviewed this as trash... have you ever written a novel...do you F****** know how challenging it is to write a novel...... Do you know how consistent you need to be to meet fans expectations every day.. Do you know how your reviews make author's feel like....They are not Super rich and have time to write novels all day... Many of these authors struggle day to day with there own problems and still write chapters at night...If you wish to support the author or help him in his growth..tell him what he could improve..and what he is lacking...Don't put upfornt posters of your ****ty opinionsComing to me... This is a f****** good novel.. The grammar has never f******* bothered me... I loved the f******* comedy that was crazy lit everytime... Has good plot.. Good world building... Good progress.. Loved it through out... and hoping that author would continue it soon....
It's a great novel that different from other.. i know the beginning is like MVS.. but everythink is like mvs nowadays tbh ahaha. Please give it a chance and you wont regret it. Plus i like the difference. For example mc is a cute and little brother type, it was my first time seeing a mc like this. Idk but it was quite refreshing for me.Author is a kind person, and always can chat with. There is a discord server. So dont forget to join there, we will be waiting~!Well, after reading my review until here, why are you still here and go read ahah~~!
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I love the story but when will you update, author?
The author is good for fulfilling the reader's smut needs occasionally. Excuse the little false on the grammars though. Looking forward to the story.
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For now (20 chapter ) it is interesting... story is well written.I hope he doesn't copy or do same thing as his previous Novel.for I will rate this Average...........
So a gamer gonna learn some manners. Very interesting read. Hey dear readers over there! Do check this story, I am sure you will find it another addiction.