although this kind of plot is common but i still like reading this kind of story
I’ve been reading this for a long time, the amount of growth and improvement in the authors writing throughout the chapters is very obvious. Includes plenty of popular fantasy and sci tropes but in a military setting which I haven’t seen before.
This novel is just insane.Really confusing in the beginning.The first few chapters may have scared of some potential readers, because it is just really confusing and the mc seams to be simply evil.But it all gets better, it is awesome to progress in the story and learn more about the mc etc...The pacing is awesome.The only thing i think of as a shame, that we cant see the mc progress through the early levels of becoming stronger, he is already stronger than the most and i would have loved to see him grow from 0 to 100. But I'm definitly going to keep reading the brilliant story
am in love withe novel and the synopsis is just great. I hope you could post more.The theme is somewhat different but it still applies to the same genre and am loving the change of pace and the character of the protagonist.I hope there is no harem cos it would spoil the pace.Nice work, keep up the hard work. The story has made my day just that its still in the beginning. I want more!!
A very good read really enjoying it the quirky lead with a tsukkomi system. The author put a lot of thought into the story, characters and the world. The pace of the story is good and the took care in portraying the personalities of everyone from siscon yandere? Brother to psychopathic step sister I think you will enjoy them all .
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I'm gonna be honest here. The story is really interesting. While attracting the readers, it provides an enjoyable read. However, there are some things that were annoying. I'm going to give a review now:─Writing Quality 5/5Word Usage: Let me give you a piece of advice here: DON'T try to use different words and phrases UNTIL you've thoroughly understood the usage of that word/phrase in a real sentence. Using synonyms is fine to not have repetitive words; however, if you've not still come to understand where, when, or how to use it, it would be better to not use it at all and go for the same word you know how to use.Word Repetition: Some words get used too much in every paragraph. For example, I got annoyed hearing "her" every few seconds while reading. I checked until chapter 12 and there were like +600 times that you used "her
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Absolutely phenomenal!!! Beautifully put together. A true masterpiece, my mind was too blank from all the boredom after having to read Books but thanks to This, it has made my day.Thank you