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"Aaaaaaaaaaahhhh!!!!!!!!! Fuck!!!! Damn,you know what, let's wait until tomorrow. If there is no answer until then, I will spam this system so much the server will go down! Just you wait..."
Unable to read an answer on the face of Love, Luck looked back down through the pure white floor and locked his eyes onto Emp who was currently consoling the girl.
The cursedly untrustworthy book answered him with a blank page. This meant he knew the answer. He stared at it.
"Two more ants shouldn't be…" Strocker began to say but got drowned out by an inferno of fire.
Once Mia heard the notification, and her screen lighted up, she was fumbling to open the message that arrived.
Was good at the start but now it’s all just mc making harem and basically all just fan service
good idea keep it up ?. its interesting to read
The book is actually amazing. i should add this to my list.
grammar is good but it kinda feels like this story is AI generated , it lacks first person perspective kinda like i am reading summary of the book, author you wasted my time
I like how you outlined your character in a design that would be relatable to your readers. Personally, I love a main character that could make me feel something and that's what made me feel about him. Moreover, as I read through the novel, it was very easy to read, resembling a feel-good novel, the type that would give the readers a sense of relief and belonging, I guess? I've read until chapter 2. Until now, I'm very intrigued at how he will carry out his life in this new world, not to mention, as a janitor. However, some sentences seem off-putting in terms of tenses. I suggest you be consistent with this one as this may distract your readers' attention in the novel. Regardless, to me, they aren't worth mentioning compared to the novel's premise itself. But still, work on them if you want to improve your writing skills further.Overall, it's very interesting. I have already added this to my library and will read this in my free time! Good job, author! :)))
Writing reviews for FP.. No interest in this book.