It gives a good feeling seeing someone bringing reference from Indian mythology to light novel culture filled with other mythology, which is rarely seen. Keep up
I'm really enjoying the story so far! The plot is intriguing, and the story is well written. The author updates very frequently, you can tell how passionate they are about writing, and how much effort they put in. I can't wait to see what happens next!
The narration and creativity are on another level if intelligence liked the way the author expresses her characters very well. It seems very engaging and ongoing as we read. Good job author, keep it up!
I had hoped for more, I like city/kingdom building novels in general and it is my favorite genre to read. I have read the first 10 chapters, it is kind of... bland... it just doesnt catch my attention. I might force myself to read the free chapters, and I rly hope it gets better. My biggest disappointment is the fact that his trip to the real world was not described. He just goes and comes back with a bunch of stuff... no talk about how he acquired them or anything. I mean let's be real... how will you get shotguns in China? it's not like he whipped them out of his arse. Same with swords and bows & arrows. No talk about how he acquired anything really... I would have really liked to see his trip as he meets the people that he does and sells them some stuff. (trip as in before he cured the kid and got scammed)When he came to the city.He didn't personally do much... or it was not described. He would just hand the papers to someone else to handle... I get that it is realistic since I would delegate work like that too if I was in the same situation... but at least tell us the path of him researching how to make a proper water wheel or something. Like a paragraph or two was enough.The chapters are short and there are some inconsistencies when it comes to either translation or maybe the author just doesnt know what he is writing. I will probably read the free chapters and update my review based on that... but for now I have read 25% of what I can read and I'm not impressed. Especially if I have to pay or use free-passes to read the rest.
The story literally makes no sense. Everything the MC does also makes no sense. Somehow satellites still work after a massive solar flare strong enough to make the ambient air temperature burning hot. The MC has no survival instinct and walks into stuff randomly with no plans or caution. Things work out because he's the MC duh. Somehow other people can also survive in the burning air despite the MC needing magical system given alloy body armor to even go outside. It's a hot mess with no real base building either. Points are given at convenient times whenever MC runs out of them. This batch is honestly a big oof.
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the most fun r-18 story with Male mc I have read. It had a huge potential to develop to a kingdom building, cultivation or to be something like power in the shadows.But it was dropped!Every goddamn story that's my favourite......the super sex system, takes of seductress, goblins evolution.....all gets dropped!
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The Nerfing just made me drop the novel at chapter 32. I really dont get authors doing stunt like this in their novels. If you dont want OP mcs (or on the brink of getting OP or feels like OP) then dont give them plot armors then tune it down in the next chapter. My opinion only take it or not, its fine.
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This is one of the most interesting and fun reads .. I really hope that this book is continued. It’s a nice development line in the trend of MC conquers everything and gets revenge ... done ina very interesting format that keeps your attention .