KorkyrosBat
This novel is fun, usual transmigration into the game world but with gatcha and summoning powers, there are many novels similar to this and all of them are dropped, i hope webnovel pick this is up so we can see the ending XD
mc talks too much and most of them chapters are wasted on his inner thoughts and calculation and kinda dense and a bit stupid, may be itll improve in future, not much explained about power levels or the background as most chapters wasted on his inner ramblings.
side characters or his harem which fortunately have their own personalities despite coming as 100% loyal to mc and also has their backstory (not explained much in these 60 chapters)
dont know why is it rated low but other cultivation novels with same revenge and trash young masters rated 5 stars XD [people are fuked up]
Overall this is an interesting NOveL
Okay I just read to chapter six and in all honesty I’m not gonna read any further untill some editing has been done since it has been devolved into the level of a machine translated story I feel like if the author can fix the mistakes the story would be quite good but honestly the grammatical errors and the fact that the way it’s written is similar to how a child who has just started speaking talks is ruining this for me
There are words missing incorrect tense used spelling mistakes while not many from what I could tell are still there I really want to like this story but untill it has been edited HEAVILY I might add I will not be returning I don’t mind that it’s bl and transmigration type stories are one of my favourites I sincerely hope the author will take an editor into consideration since he has decided to write a novel in English
Beautifully written, can feel the emotions every character is being through, love the way characters are being portrayed.
Dark, intriguing and emotional story.
(Strong female lead)
amazing novel
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I love this story. It is a very fun and interesting read. I always love when a new chapter comes out. I am so happy it is being updated again
ok..Synopsysis seems coolbut is this the same author from 40 millenniums of cultivation?I hope this book is as good as that one.if it is then this deserves to join my best book ever list and bcom a legend
author is using unreasonable assasination technique ... it's illogicalAuthor didn't learn about medical knowledge ; human anatomy, forensic etc....let me tell you... in the first 10 chapters, MC shifted to a fly. He stabbed the victim with a needle at the artery.that needle has 0,2 mm in width and 1 cm / 10 mm in depth... meanwhile the common carotid artery exhibited the closest average distance to the skin (23.5 +/- 6.9 mm) whereas the internal carotid artery exhibited the closest average distance to the vertebral body (7.36 +/- 3.8 mm, measured to the transverse process)the needle could not reach the arteryyou could see the picture
Okay for new readers, here's my message for you, 'read at least 5 chapters before you decide to drop it'. This story is based on emotions, the inner world of a person, he might be a prodigy of music for others but within himself. it is his journey towards his future as he comes to term with his present and maybe his past in later chapters.I liked what I read, this is not your fast food style novel, rather you need to sit down & invest yourself to enjoy it.
tho levi is just a young *****, he managed to handle difficult situations. i hope he still can do it until the end of the story. really nice story.
