I personally see no flaws in the story, characters, or world. The author has written a true neutral evil anti-hero and it’s beautiful. For a undead all the main character’s actions make sense for the way he should think. I look forward to his character development and wonder if he will find any shreds of humanity in him left over from his previous life as a human and how that will affect his goals in the world.
One of the best novels I have ever read.
Incredible story with characters that reflect their own personalities. Beautiful descriptions and the pictures illustrate well the author's world backround. The main character is engaging and I look forward to seeing where he takes me. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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At 391, the translation quality dropped to rock bottom. It's the worst kind of edited MTL I have seen in a long time. What's worse is that this book can't be unlocked chapter by chapter. Instead, you have to purchase the whole book at once.Save your money and read this elsewhere. ☠️
Read Previously on MTL 94chaps and Dropped. Here is my review after reading the MTL......... "story is kinda good, Mc is OP But I don't like the fact that every single enemy MC Fights they always Underestimate him even with All the Clues/Evidence/And Stories about MC Power they just tend to ignore it just because they Think There can't be anyone Powerful Like that, They Know About the Immortals But haven't seen their power, Yet they tend to compare mc to immortals saying even Immortals Can't do what Mc is doing so It must be fake news. everyone only believe in the concept that if I didn't saw or heard about This Kind Level of Power Previously then this Power is Fake And doesn't exist at all. Its just brainded and Dumb to read for me.. i get frustrated reading this again and again..
I love where this is going , keep on writing this novel have a pretty good potential and ill be following this till the end . Just dont make mc soft and a good guy saving everyone.
Typical kid mc that is extremely arrogant and unlikeable, nothing new. It started of well with the mc background but slowly devolved into the mc being arrogant once br started to get stronger. Killing people constantly with no regards. Had potential but unfortunately bad mc development killed the story for me.
I hate this stockpile thing. If u want a stockpile Bonus chapter that is ok but where is usual everyday chapters ...............................
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While I star rated this a 4 I think the quality of the story is at best 3.5.
The story starts off with a mortal with immense cultivation potential living on a world where cultivation is almost impossible. A master from the Divine Plane comes down to his world and watches over him for 400 years and gives him a cultivation technique that can be used to refine his body by killing others. After 400 years the main character is almost dead a second master comes and the two master pity him being born on a low plane.
The masters use their cultivation resources and together send him to a world where he can cultivate and use a forbidden technique to reverse his age to 12. The masters also impart numerous divine techniques and items that will allow him to easily cultivate to the Divine Plane and meet them again.
Now on to my thoughts of the story. Overall, the story is interesting as you follow his path to get stronger while avoiding cliches. But, the story has many drawbacks that may disinterest you from reading further into the story.
1. Lack of dialogue: dialogue is scarce in the novel and on many occasions this has left the main character and the people he interacts with have no special characteristics or development.
2. Romance: This is a harem novel and up to chapter 151 so far he has 4 partners and a 5th one is hinted as one of his masters has a granddaughter we will meet in the future. Nothing wrong right? The problem lies in the authors complete avoidance of romantic development that makes you care about his wives . They are just thrown together without any explanation an old you are left to fill in the blanks. Also, as said previously, the lack of dialogue leaves all intamancy for you to make up on your own. (Notice: sex scenes are kept at 1-2 sentences so keep your pants on)
3: After the first few chapter with an introduction that left me thinking that the story would be a 1 in 100 novel I was met with disappointment. While unique in it's own right, the writing style is boring and without life. It follows the same pattern for every chapter.
(This happened--->how it happened--->why it happened---->random long info dumo---->mc reaction)
4: fight scenes aren't well described and are anti-climactic
5:There is no perspective of the main character so we have no way to connect with him and have a deeper enjoyment. And the format is monotone and systematic. (It gets boring after a bit)
Now that I have put that out, if you are still with me, I will say the highlights of the story.
The thing that kept me with this and is keeping me here is the world building. I'd you make it through the explanations and other things, you'll find yourself with a well described system of cultivation and profound understanding of the worlds he visits and how The different planes, creatures, and factions interact. It is easy to understand his power level compared to others and what drives the factions and people he meets to do what they do.
Whether this story will interest you is up to you to decide. I think that as long as you preserver through the first 30 or so chapters you will enjoy the story more and come to like it.
Thank you for reading this review!!!!!
The mc is a total retard. In the beginning of chapter it's said that auron can drop the item also there is no contract time that said after the duel the guild and his character must instantly be deleted. He can first calm his mine assembly the elite team that got the potion and ask them first then investigate the cold bank acc and etc and make a proof to trap vice guild and detroy her then assembly the upper echelon of the guild, it's unreasonable if in the whole guild he is the only pillar there's must be someone that he can trust and give the equipment to him and give the leadership to another one so that they can't be bribe and keep each other check then delete the character and start new. I don't hate this kind of novel but this mc is total retard ...