It's a very good novel keep it up......
Worthy reading
I'm so pissed off Author, did you have to have him cheat again in chapter 26???
I don't even want to finish the damn book!...
Alot of grammer mistakes with broken English. At least 3 chapters have being duplicated into other chapter numbers. Hope this doesn't happen alot more...
This is a great story! It’s not your typical story and has a lot of great twists.
Wow.. what a beautiful story. Full of unexpected surprises! So, so happy with how everything turned out. Beautifully written, flowed well. Truly an amazing story on here. Amazing job author! ?
This book is a hot mess! The writing is all over the place and it doesn’t flow. You can’t even follow the story bc it keeps jumping so you aren’t even sure if the chapter is continuous or maybe the author missed a chapter to upload.......
More chapters
At the beginning, the storyline was indeed intriguing and managed to capture my interest, but unfortunately, it started to lose its appeal as the story progressed. Considering that this is a romance novel focused on explicit content, one shouldn't expect a deep or complex plot. However, there's plenty of steamy scenes for those who enjoy that aspect.
The novel has its merits, but the main character (MC) struggles with some issues. He holds back from expressing affection due to his past with his childhood sweetheart. Despite writing a heartfelt letter, it gets intercepted by a rival character, delaying any potential love triangle. Although there's promise of a harem, their meeting and the MC's eventual confession seem far off, possibly not happening until volume 20 or beyond.
The world is decent but lacks depth; it's neither extraordinary nor terrible. The author's world-building skills could be improved, earning a rating of 2 out of 5. The characters, unfortunately, feel two-dimensional, contributing to a score of 2 out of 5 as well.
The story itself isn't bad, with the MC being strong from the start. However, when faced with bullying, his reactions are underwhelming – he seems to do nothing about it. Despite these shortcomings, I still find the story engaging and somewhat hooked, giving it a 3.5 out of 5. The translation is acceptable.
Please note that my English might not be perfect, and I apologize for any errors.
what happend bro ?
Does he get stronger or just has no abilities till the end?. Read till chapter 21, where a literal child can kill him.