The usual humor in his eyes was gone, replaced with rage and anxiety. His gaze swept toward An Sun's injured body and the fists by his side clenched.
- Description: Obtain Leo Maw's Legacy
I was overwhelmed.I held his hands tightly as a gesture of gratitude.Then I progressed towards the Grand Hall.
Xia Liang bit his shoulder lightly but she didn't tease the serious man again. "Ah Yan, let's always be together. Alright?"
The grammar is one of the biggest flaws of this.It would greatly help the author if they put their story is a word document or grammarly or etc before publishing, because the amount of grammar mistakes makes me think they made it in under an hour an were cutting corners.
overall .its gooodd......................
I'm at chapter five and i have to drop my review.keep up the good work author, anticipating more chapters ??
I love this book. Pancakeswitch did it again with this one. A mix of fantasy, mystery, mythology, Solo Leveling nods, lots of fun moments in between, and more. While Pancakeswitch has said that there won’t have any romance or sexual content in the book. But I do hope maybe in the end or the epilogue maybe the two possible love interest Annabelle and Baihe one or both might be implied they are together with Anna(even if it is still stay as a no romance even in that chapter). I do like despite no romance in the book there is still technically some love interests for Anna.
Good story and power system but the translation is a bit confusing sometimes
I’m really liking it so far and looking forward to mor! Added to my library.
Characters are very good, as far as non-human stories are concerned, if not slightly wooden. The mcs power level raises quite quickly but not too quickly and the only real issue for me is that the fl is called Benladann which I keep reading as Bin Ladin and that is more funny than anything else. Overall not bad.
This is definitely a very interesting story I came across. I like how the author arranged the sequence of the events and scenes. Read this novel you will surely love it. Author cut down the paragraphs for easy reading.I hope to read more from you.?