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I read the raws at some point a city called Sakura City appears and the protagonist compared it to "that nation" also known as Japan. He goes on to state how unrighteous they are the same drivel you see these brainwashed Chinese publish over and over again.
Wasn’t there a novel exactly the same but he was a swordman
Ok, since there are only 4 chapters currently... I can't say much, except the few grammar errors that I found which could easily be edited and the para-phrasing that could be improved... The story is just awesome! A await to see how the story goes in the later chapters!
Decent story, Very pro China (Author is from China so make sense).MC is very low key and there is a lot of Face Slapping of people who try to take advantage of the products he brings into the real world.Minor Issue:Every now and then real world events are placed awkwardly into the story so the Author can share his opinion on them, and then they are never brought up again.Major Issue:Part way through the story Atlas Studio's decent translations are replaced by 549690339 and their translations are around the same level (maybe slightly better) as MTL. Making a chapter not even worth the price of one of your free daily tickets, let alone coins (and chapters are cut up from the original, so your really only getting half a chapter)
can we just say that we hate webnovel? 3 whole weeks and no good webnovel it has deteriorated.???????????????????????
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Hahaha man, its fresh for me with that old man bast*rd. But every chapter its to short. How much word it takes ? less than 1000 ? i think its better you make for more than 1000 word per chapter
It ’s good but if I was the mc I will never forgive the heroins like they did to much u just can’t forgive them like that.But nice story
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