Requesting everyone to read all twenty chapters or at least ten chapters before submitting a review. It’s not the best, but it’s a good novel.
a great story but very confusing had to drop since i found my self confused and questions unanswered, it would make for a very good story but i think it was poorly executed.
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I have just read the introduction and the story is sooo captivating that I can bet, only after the introduction anyone would love to know the story. The writing style is hooking, and the plot is unique and interesting. This book has the potential to stand out. All the best author with your journey! It's a must-read book. ✨
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I have read all the chapters of this story. So far so good!
I bet that it will be a very good story to read with a cup of coffee.
Great Job, Ryan_Saga! You did well.
A book that has an actual decent plot and not one of those "MC can see through everything" or the "I sign up in a dark room by myself for 1,000 years and come out the strongest." Yet I don't see nearly as much people voting for it as they would for the others. Just a big let down to see what people want instead of good stories then they go and blame the APP.
Like it so far, as others have said it seems based on Let Me Game In peace, but hey all the new ones are rip offs lately so whats new....
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Since my previous review was deleted and I woke up like 5 minutes ago I will keep this short and simple. Characters: Entertaining and fleshed out. Chapter length: Just right. Story progression: A bit slow but completely fine. Thank you for letting me know that my previous review got deleted author sama. I highly recommend to new readers.
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
The story is compelling and has a wonderful twist...I recommend it. to sci Fi and adventure lovers out there...it opens us to different worlds