great story from repeated topics
good potential but sadly not continuing
guide appears OP but it's like a prediction power and not making the MC stronger is a great plot with thorough development
this is a very nice novel although there are spelling mistakes and missing words my mind auto corrects it any way.... I am a bit concerned with the fact this hasn't been updated for a month but I will keep on waiting cause I am wondering on how the novel will progress!
This book is really good and I loved the way the whole situation was put on and even I feel there is something wrong in the attic. One of the best ones I read in this month and would love to read more for the one who expressed it so well. Keep going
This book is very well do I just wish their was more chapters but as long as at least a chapter a week is released i feel that this book would do wonderfully. keep up the good work.
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I expected copper but found gold…but for real though, this novel is hella underrated.Hopefully this gets attention, because the author absolutely deserves it.
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It is quite good, excellent grammar for webnovel standards. The character building is actually quite decent as well, and the slower paced arcs are quite noce for a change. I’m looking forward to more! I hope you don’t dissapoint Sir Author/Diaper lover.
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great story has a balanc system thatsnot to over powered only read a little bit but good so far
The grammar has its issue but overall the story is great. I'd appreciate if the author improved his writing but apart from that am rooting for this book, added to my library.
I will get to each reason why and will update frequently maybe every fifty chapters 1:Writing quality- most is great writing quality the only issue is the lack of description and depth to the world and story which correlates to two other, there is also the fact that it doesn’t explain a lot about time, so it gets confusing, that’s why it got a three2:Updating Stability- pretty standard not to the point where I can read a new chapter everyday but I can understand so I still gave it a 4 star3:Story Developement- the story goes fast paced which doesn’t allow me personally to get a sense of depth with the characters and it kind of goes too fast with the affinities and gaining of abilities, that’s why I gave it a 3 star4:Character design- we don’t really don’t get any defining features of the character like body build background or history so it makes it hard to envision it which is why it got a 2 star5:World Background- we don’t get a lot of explanation about the world and what it looks like and we have no history of anything like families of the characters or anything like that so in my opinion that’ s why I gave it a 2 starI thank you for reading my review and don’t let it keep you from reading the story because the concept is great this is only here for the author to better his book, have a great day this will be updated when we reach 50 chapters so look forward to it