Don't mind me, I'm just supporting my lonely book. Ganbatte author...........................................................................
love it there are problems and solutions that are reasonable to a extent and is interesting to read, i hope there's more...............................
I really enjoyed reading this story so far and I have caught up all the way, I do think that people should give it a try. I'm not saying that it is perfect, but other than the annoying main character in the beginning which he just develops better as time goes on I really like the story. I find most of the side characters interesting and the story always keeps me engaged and even though he is slightly overpowered he is not just steamrolling through the other characters there are a lot of character that give him a tough time. Keep up the good work author can wait for more.
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I just finished reading your first chapter. I must say you put a lot of work in it and it's creative. However, it's a lot of exposition in the first Chapter.All the backstory, worldbuilding... You know. Every Information that's not conveyed by Dialogue or Action.The other scenes beside the Exposition are good though.Keep as much Information as possible hidden from the audienceThey are smart, and will figure it outYou have a great Set up. Try to show a little bit of scene of mc getting bashed up in his date or something. I'm not a date expert. So, I can't tell you this in detail. Only can give an idea of what should be written first. If you show such scenes where mc feel very low and sad, although he put a lot of effort in this date, it would give a proper way to convey emotions of the mc in a dialogue or actions.Also, show only what is necessary for the character to know, not for the audience. Like the god of creation and God of void info.It's too much for me to process this much info right at the beginning and I'm sure it is same for other readersAdditionally, it makes it reasonable to tell our mc and the the audience patiently, the Info that's very basic for anyone to know.It is currently all internal, I think that's hard to convey without any external reflection. Like, talking with someone else about it, or showing the emotional change through action can get a better effect.If you just tell what happened, it also takes a little bit away from the Reader finding out about it. You know...Now, I am not an expert though...I've seen many novels doing the same thing at first. some get popular while some doesn't. It depends.So, it's up to you whether you feel right to change the arrangement of plot a bit and add some emotional scenes in it to make it more lively and natural. That's all I have to say. I'll leave a review on webnovel if you like. However, I need your permission If I can put this up or not. thinkingAnyway, good work. You did a great job! Keep it up!
A translation mess where ascending the Heavens is easier than finding this novels plot.
20 chapters in, so far it is great
although the theme is overused
it is still one of the best (quality may change in the future).
Hope it get picked.
Very interesting. Writing quality is incredible. The story is enjoyable. It's addictive to read./......................................................................:)
Nice plot. Would recommend it to anyone who likes reading, looking forward to the next chapter. Hope you all the best in your writing career
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Okay so this story is still in the beginning phase but I have no qualms that it's going to be big. The opening chapter is catchy and everything else is. The characters I have seen so far are shrouded in mystery and they really make me want more. I don't review much but this story has a really good start.
Everything about this book is attractive, right from the cover, the title and the moment I dived into it there was everything amazing waiting ahead. I love the world setting and the way character is going to grow with it. [img=update] Update superfast so I can read more of it.