Horizon086
9 chapters in and word padding is already at work. How could he forget that he had Date Trees in his inventory? I mean, does he have a memory of a fcking ant? Also, he eradicated the Jackalans, the original inhabitants of the desert even the children just because they are in the oasis. You know, their own territory!? Also, the MC has the personality of a white slice bread, he tries to appears smart but really, he is just as stupid as the rest of the computer generated people that inhabits his territory. And to top it all off, this was not an original novel but a translated one. Meaning, it is just sh*t chinese novel all in all. I am seeing 5 star reviews in here and I honestly don't get it. Even the worst fan fiction of Harry Potter on this site is BETTER than this sh*t.
it's not too bad but a lot of the time I feel it's really cliche and moves too fast. Also when he crafts things nothing interesting happens it's kinda like "First this then this then that finally this" and it gets pretty repetitive and boring
Hello guys , anyone kind enough to write down here the link of the updated chapters for this novel please (chinese website) . Also did you guys use google translate or is there any better website to do it ? Thankyou all in advance ?
a good story and storyline but the needs to finish the novel seen many good novel that is not finished always please finish the novel and just write at your own pace
Good Story, the begining is so hard to understand but after that i enjoy reading the rest.it keep the suspense and can make us immerse in emotions but sometime give a downer because how easy some important enemy just brush aside so easily and become joke. In my personal opinion the romance is bad in this story and i dont like the main heroine because the girl so bratty and there is no clear chemistry and seems forced. But overall this story is very satisfying
The great Sloth, is a man of motivation, creating the most dynamic of characters with the flick of his pen, Keep your eye on this novel its sure to be a hit! Amazing story 10/10
the story was good till now until the MC takes responsibility of a child in chapter 290, it seems like the MC is a priest rather than a king, and he is only 15 years old, so what's the need to make him a Dad this early without even a partner at that. I thinking of dropping it now. I really liked the character creation and world. Still it could have been better...
Well it was good at first. City transmigrate to new world in middle of forest filed with goblins/gnomes. All humans get taming books to tame monsters, everyone starts from weak monsters. The story was fresh and funny to this point then MC gets golden spoon and it all go ... MC can fuze killed monsters to upgrade his own for example he starts with goblin so after killing 2goblins and fusing their spirit with his own he gets Hoggoblin that is many times stronger than his original goblin. Its just too op when you look at it in long ran so im dropping it.
...............good.......book........please............continue...................I..........need.........more.............................yes..........
Super good. Riveting story. I have really enjoyed it and wish for more. Characters are all wrote well, there is obvious wish fufillment and OPness but that is what I want.
I actually liked how the ML was portrayed, his actions are based on logical, clear and honest deliberations...I can honestly say that he's an upright gentleman...The girls in this story though are very pushy...???Hoping it gets selected...For now, I'm gonna head on to the raws...?
Thanku author I will keep your warning in mind and will not read the novel,.....,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,m,m,m,m.,.,.,.,.,...z.,.,.,.,..,.,..,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,..,.,,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,
