As someone who has read most of the sports novels on this site, this is original among them, not only that but a system that is balanced unlike (All Soccer Abilities are mine!) This system flows smoothly and the players growth can be explained well. Characters are good, each one has their own personality. MOST IMPORTANTLY, the novel isn’t hard to read, there is no such thing as toughening out some chapters because every chapter is engaging, and finally, I waited a while to write to see the update schedule, and happy to say a good amount of chapters every week. Love it so far. Read it!
So I tried to come back to this story again... It's got a ton of potential but you'll run into a weird problem in it.The author said that ability is limitless time and again in this story. But at chapter 47 the teacher basically tells him that his ability has reached its peak and that the only way to advance if through buying a better cultivation manual. This is complete and utter BS. If origin abilities had limitations then why do they matter? Isn't it better to max out the harder to master human body?So I was pretty upset and went to read other reviews where I discovered that the MC only upgrades his ability through those cards in the future.Really this isn't a terrible idea but its the way the author writes this story that gets on my nerves. Maybe this story is good in it's home language but the translation for this story is beyond terrible. Half the sentences that should have a depth of meaning are pretty blunt and straightforward.Take this sentence:No wonder, with only an E grade talent, you rushed all the way to 200 points. With such a degree of model analysis, I’m afraid that this ability has already reached its peak.So the author does things like this a lot. What's it mean to rush all the way to 200 points? Didn't he spend years refining his ability? This is a Professor who is basically considering his training "rushing". It's these types of sentences that show up all over the place. Things that are hard and require effort or talent are discarded like that.And this is the second thing. His ability has reached its peak? How so? I can think of a few dozen ways model analysis could be used combatively and other ways.1. analysis of Terran and input of instant defensive equipment.2. Analysis of Unknown monster and identification of weaknesses instantly3. Analysis of tracks made and infer the originator via saved models.and so on. He's clearly a tracking/brain type. The key is his ability has to be instant, unblockable, and allow him to fight while using it. What sucks is apparently origin abilities can be blocked. This is a total wth moment. How is a world which uses origin abilities to fight blocked so easily?My second beef with the story starts at chapter 52. We just came from a fight with a repeater. What's completely bizarre in this fight is that the MC with 300 fitness points doesn't easily overpower a guy with 110.This is pretty much the example of combat you'll see from beginning until now. This author does not understand combat.
I felt that the whole Lira situation was unnecessary.
I was so happy before reading this novel...i wish I had never read it. The first part seemed everything i read seems so strange or unfair to me, i don't even know why the author gave all that potential at the beginning if he then seems to do everything to make it the same as that of others. If i didn't know sunny was the protagonist then i would think he's just a useless secondary character. I read all the chapters hoping it would improve but nothing happened...I'm sorry but I'll stop reading it
please update dear
Three chapters got updated twice because of network issue. I will get them updated with new chapters as soon as possible. don't worry, your coin won't be wasted. thank you for understanding.
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This is NOT your typical 2-mate story. This is NOT a traditional love triangle. Accept those things and you'll love this story. It's an emotional journey of an alpha and his curse with a great whodunit thrown in. Noone does emotional conflict quite like Author Muse. Grab your tissues for this one!
updates to slow
I really enjoyed and loved it from beginning to end. Fell in love with the characters and the roller-coaster of emotions.
Just do yourself a favor and read this book! These diverse characters and the way the author truly details them along with the absolutely unique and beautiful storyline is awe-inspiring! Allow this book to consume you and your emotions and then thank the author for providing us with such a piece!
Great story!