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I don't understand how can one say all credit goes to Original Author, Translator,Editor and stuff and post this here. I don't know if it's copied or new Translator or Webnovel is starting afresh or bought from other Translator and besides Novel Updates shows the Publisher as xxsy so is it some how linked with Webnovel if not how then it's here Legally. Well I already read it elsewhere so not going to read it anyhow just giving my view and besides the other Translation is almost at the end. If Webnovel is Officially and Legally doing Translation here then Props to you guys and all the best I guess ?? I will vote medium as I don't want to blemish the Novel story
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A different if not new take on the "reborn to live life over" genre, the MC was in his 50s before, a violent and villainous man unhappy with his life/how he got there. Upon awakening as his 10 year old self again he has be slowly adjusting to both getting to start over and have another chance at making his childhood better, and struggling with his violent temper and ***** sensibilities. This is compounded by his seemingly superhuman abilities, and notice of human scum around him that he was too niave to perceive the first time around. Add on to this the fact that the MC's love interest from his previous life is also revealed to the audience (thought not yet to the MC) to possibly be another reincarnation, or have some other story herself, possibly even setting her up to be a second protagonist/MC.This story seems it will deal with dark themes and follows an MC that does drastically violent deeds, especially when he is annoyed and has a deserving target to vent on, and as such may not be a good choice for those with a history of trauma. That said, this review is written early into its release and the plot is only beginning to be revealed. Many things have still yet to be revealed.The grammar/spelling could use an editor's touch, but is still better than some other books I have read here, even ones I spent SS on.
First of all CONGRATULATIONS for coming on the second spot in the Contest.You diverted from your romance style and tried something different and I liked it.It wasn't up to the mark but for the first try it was good. I hope you'll try out other genres too. You can do good in that as well I think. About the book I would say that there could have. been more story. However I know it was for a contest so.....The last chapter was unexpected.... directly five years later. And I felt that there are loose ends in the story. I don't know whether you have left it for purpose or it was because you wanted to complete the story but there are.It was a good try and it is a good story.Also update regularly.
Simple descriptions and abundant dialogues made up for the first few chapters, making the writing style stand out a little. I like how the the trauma of the main chracter occured in waves and was long-drawn instead of being cured in a single day.The emotions of the characters are expressed heartily and so are their characters. Good work??
Firstly,the title attracted me then after opening it,I couldn't stop my self from reading it,it's so interesting, ?can't stop craving for more ? thanks to the author for a novel like this
A good novel and it has a real chance to get picked since there are fewer novels in number in this round of trial read. System in modern world with a smart and weird mc not cliche situation until now...
Haven't read it yet but that Synopsis and Comment is better than, lets be generous, 70% of the rest on this """wonderful""" app. Imma get reading and update this later. 5☆ for now :)
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The story is still developing. Please add to library or a positive review for the story to continue;) Thank you:).
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see the whole story is really good I love the characters and all of what they are doing but the grammer is messing with me it's not even like it's a couple misspelled words there is a constant replacement of she and he as well as yo and I other than that I enjoyed it
