Hello, readers! I'm just writing this review to give a little more insight into my book. It gets into the story quickly so it's not bad pacing-wise. However, the first few chapters might feel like it's lacking in meaning. Like it may feel as if the characters are simply just in the game to survive. But I urge you to continue past this as the plot gets very interesting further down. You'll be able to feel the drive and the direction that I want the story to go in. And there's a lot of foreshadowings as well so pay attention to them.Lastly, if you like this book after reading then please check out my other book called The Mind World And The Outcast Hero. In some ways, it's even better than this one. So please give it a try as I'm sure you won't be disappointed. I appreciate the support!
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It's good...................................................................................................................................
The only ones more stupid than the MC are teachers.Jokes aside. This novel has an interesting concept, but the avarage character totally lacks common sense and the MC is the worst offender.Any situation is practically just a justification why we should think the MC is just the most awesome great God badass...The concept of the MCs ability is interesting, but ridiculously OP and way to different from the rest of the characters to lead to credible world building.
Awful cliche ridden disaster, 30 chapters in and mc has cultivated a total of 1 time, the rest of the chapters are just filled with mc smacking around and insulting every single person he crosses path with for no reason what so ever. He doesn't even fight himself just sics his guard on them. So far he has done absolutely no achelmy and his computer cheat has never been used more than once which he only used it to read a few books. There is nothing likeable at all about the mc, and the humor and jokes fall flat.
The best novel from this batch. .
Damn dude, this has a very awesome grammar, also a stylised writing, which makes for a very interesting reading (it kinda feels like a "real" book, doesn't feel like a poorly translated novel) there's only one chapter out and I'm already a fan of this one and I totally hope for it to go very far
It is a really good book but I just wish you posted more chaps author, have you given up on this amazing novel? ----------------------------------------------
Warning: there aren’t much chapters at the moment, so this review may change. If it does, I’ll update it. This novel is extremely worth reading, it’s a thrilling action with a bunch of twists and will keep you on your toes. I don’t want to spoil very much, so I’ll put a quick summary without spoiling anything. A dude is reincarnated into another world as the overseer, or cult leader. He’s bleased by the 4 “beacons”, and gains a system like book. This book is a really unique take on the genre and worth a shot. Form your own opinions on it, but in my opinion, this book is worth reading.
So Far i love the concept and development, i need to read more to see how it is, but if it is like the other Authors Fics then im sure it would be good, one of the few non harem novel and one of the original novels that probably doesn't have any unnecessary drama over the main Couple, not to mention its free unlike other original novels that doesn't worth the shot, so definitely you should give it a try
Some novels deserve a second review after we've read enough chapters to form a solid opinion on it, and Wargrounds deserves that attention. Aa I've said before, MMORPG stories are a dime a dozen here on WN, but SilentMild's story differs from the pack quite obviously because of the interesting way the story is progressing. Allow me to point them out:The protaginist, Al, isn't your typical can-do-all character, even with his all-powerful A.I. He's genuinely trying to better himself. If he had one glaring flaw, it's his inability to seal the deal with his love interest. The supporting characters are equally interesting. For example, Poppabear starts out as your 'Leeroy Jenkins' in the starting chapters but grows as a team player in the latter chapters even though he still retains his crazy charge tendencies. The other characters, Sophia, Osho, Solomon, Patric, etc aren't flat characters who conform to just one typical stereotype. Also, there are interesting people like Cyber Husky out there. LolThe writing improves dramatically over the course of 50+ chapters, and you can clearly see the author's genuine desire to provide quality content to his readers because he is trying to improve his work constantly. I've nagged him tons in the first few chapters on proper grammar and he's been diligently editing it to make the writing smoother. The world of Wargrounds so far is interesting too, changing from a Fortnite style game to an openworld reminiscent of WOW. Visually simple yet interesting enough to want to read about. And i hear there's going to be a _______ type competition in the future!If I have one complaint, it's that I don't see an actual villian in the story other than the Y__________ but there doesn't seem to be a connection to our protagonist... Well done on this work and I really hope you keep it up, Author! I'm rooting for you.
The ending is quite abrupt. I guess the author got bored of writing the story or ran out of ideas and just decided to find a point to just end it. Some plots never went anywhere and some were just left unresolved.