This is one of the best stories I found on Webnovel. ?I will always look forward to updates from this story, and don't forget to keep the spirit Author ???
amazing novel has tons of potential to be in top 10 already better than some of the novel there now good action and plot and not really overpowered
The plot is amazing and the events are written beautifully, I can read this story till the end as it totally stood up to my taste, just little polishing and you're all set, great work ❤️❤️❤️
This is not a merchant novel but a **** novel,I cant read it anymore, the story is about *** and ***,. And the business development is lame.
Very interesting story, good character development and great story flow. The only thing I can suggest was to keep the consistency of your story. If you can make more character development, try it because your characters in the story is one of the most important part in the plot that you wanted to have... thats all
I don't know why but sometimes it's hard to read the couple the MC is with, it's not worth it at the beginning everything is fine, after his visit everything falls apart I don't know why I feel that her partner slept with Maylo sometimes he feels more like the protagonist, Adele has more chemistry with MC they are a nice couple.
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mc without brain, mc without intelligence, mc without logic, this novel will not continue..................... ..........................................
This is surprisingly a good read, the protaganist is intelligent and crafty. He use his brains more than his brawn. It has interesting side character as well. I hope this book get selected because I really wants to know what happens next.
Take it all. All my power stones are reserved for you. Even if it's only one. Author, you have my heart, my souls my eyes, and my everything~everything~You are my everything. Hashtag, I am straight.
Kairan is a male MC and he acts lika a typical Karen.He annoyed the brown thing out of me. I gave up on 26th chapter.I couldn't get through his development phase.