Honestly I hate this story it is garbage and I read a ton of stuff that is Chinese and translated. This author just write a MC that you will have for how stupid he is while also nursing him at every point he can get. really hope you turn this story around author but I won't be here to read it.
the book is going on the way of becoming a masterpiece ....I request the author make it a peak level masterpiece for us....
Hello, I am Lonelythree and this is the first time I am reviewing my book and want to tell you something.First, this book would follow a mixed pov writing style with a majority in the First person and some parts third person.Secondly, this novel would follow a mix of fantasy, lore, secret groups, evil religion, evil gods, the Academy, and Mc having its followers so you can expect a great number of things.The pacing would be a bit slow and world-building would be crafted phase by phase so that there isn't much info dump.This is my first novel with a serious story with a lot of things going so I might make mistakes but do suggest corrections and remind me of plot holes.Before you form your opinion, I would ask you to read the first 20-30 chapters before disliking or commenting on it.Constructive criticism is accepted but doesn't just give 1-star with no feedback and filled with symbols. Give 1 star but have a say about what you disliked and what can be improved.
i have been waiting for more of these space mercenary novels, and this definitely is a good read as of now, at least for me it has everything I hoped for. thx author I hope it gets more updates ??
I really enjoy this novel and I consider myself pretty picky about what I read! I love all the characters and the writing style is so fluid. The dynamic between the main character and the male lead has such a nice development. It has frequent chapter releases and I get excited every time I see the notification! Overall, I recommend reading this.
Author Here…So I have decided to give my own review. There is actually nothing much to say, as though my work will speak for me… hehe.Although I am required to say something.Um… where to begin? Oh Yes!This Novel follows the journey of the MC getting all the ladies he wants. "That's it…? Can't you say more about me…? You are my author y'know" Say the MCSigh' (Author sighs)I actually don't know what to say here. I mean the work will say everything."For shame…" Says the MC. "…don't worry about my author. He's shameless. However, you can just try out the novel. There are 50k+ free words, so you can hop on now and begin. Yes… now. Go…! Start…!Don't worry forget about the remaining things that are written below they are not relevant anymore. Hehe don't mind me they are…"Look who's being shameless now."Be quiet author…!" The MC exclaims.Sigh' (Author sighs ?)==================Don't mind me Guys. This is all just for show.However you can give the novel a try. If it is something you like, then continue and be ready for more. But if it's not something you like… well, keep reading… hehe, until you find that something. I am sure you would.There will be a lot of smut. Yes lots of it. Although that wouldn't be all. There will also be a detailed plot on the MC's journey of getting all the ladies he wants, and his relationship with them. DETAILED. This is not going to be in the usual way, rather it would be more classic.The story at first doesn't cover a lot, but it is still good, for it is the ground foundation of everything that is to come.Anyways, that will be all for me here. If you have any questions to ask, you can do that right here, or you can leave them in the comment. I will always reply… you. I repeat, ALWAYS. So don't be shy. If there are any more updates I will upload it in an auxiliary.Goodbye for now, see ya in the story… hehe ?
First time iam writing a review on this website, I love the novel, finally no absorb shit like all the others.
The first chapter was intriguing. The way u convey how the MC was being bullied.. his expression and thought about it was on point. And I liked the fact that you added mystery in every chapter making people guessing what is this? Why? It makes me scroll to the next and the next until I ended up reading to the last chapter ... damn you made me lose time on writing my story. LOLOverall, despite ur confusing me, I still read it. So I'm giving you a full 5 star. Because U managed to magic ur way to my curiosity.
loving how the story has unfolded so far , I hope the roller-coaster ride will bring more adventurous and heart wrenching emotions to life ??.... I hope the MC's unborn baby in her second life doesn't suffer the same faith as in her 1st life and I am eagerly looking forward to the character development of many other interesting characters mentioned in the story
I like the story, it's interesting and it's awesome ?
how is this a good villain novel,mc is pathetic beyond belief, he suffereed a loss because of some heroine, who neglect him,and he is being to nice to them,acting like a typical hero protaganist. if compare to the main villain novel, this one is truly pathetic.
do u have a discord?? btw i love this story!-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------