wow!!!
what a novel it's really interesting and the impact it's already having on me is too much for me to take...
clap for your author.
keep up the good work.
mc is an asshole. The rest of the story seems ok. His actions defy common sense. Trying not to let anything slip about the story, to leave this review.
I try to used a Binary converter to read the story. Each Segment comes with a link for a song in you tube. I gave the story a neutral review cause maybe the writer wants only people that are fluent in binary to read it, and i don't want to be mean.
**: I don't like it
Please make the MC turn into someone important and then make him improve the qualities of life on earth, and if you want to make the Earth the best planet. And humiliate some asshole who despises the land
A very interesting tale from the perspective of an actual NPC that goes and fights against the players and the insane madness that players are committing very well done and very impressed.
Ahem.
Don't look at me strangely...
Nice storyline, hope you keep up the good work, and also improve along the way.
I am really confused. This used to be an actual novel and it was pretty good I was looking forwards to reading it. Then all of a sudden there were no updates for a long time. I came back to see if the author had started updating again but the entire story is gone. It is now replaced with a single chapter that repeats 24 times and that was not part of the story. What happened?
this book should need attention i love this genre❤️
It's alright.The main issue for me is the change in writing style. In later chapters it's written in such a melodramatic way. For example a character will be fighting to save a city and it will say, "She must retain her boundless resolve to sacrifice herself for justice. The fate of the world depended on her and she must not falter." Then it will keep going like that for 2 or 3 paragraphs before doing any fighting. It also began to focus mostly on everyone except the main character. It's not unreasonable given the setup of the MC staying behind the scenes in his dungeon, but I liked how Top Tier Providence balanced that better.Except... the other characters are actually more interesting than the MC and his subordinates. Because the MC and his crew become cardboard cutouts who pretty much only say cringe and cliche villain lines.
Really looking forward to new chapters. I really enjoy this novel and where the current story is now!
I'm finding this book really hard to get into as the premise of it all is so sht. The whole reason for everything is basically he didn't complete his father's dream so he felt guilty af, resulting in a slump, his mother was disappointed in the mc for not following his father's dream resulting in them distancing themselves.
He goes back and decides to complete his father's dream instead and goes from there. It is repeatedly mentioned how bad it was because he didn't follow his father's dream.
To me, this is so sht and just rly hard to get into. As the mc did nothing wrong, he just made rly bad business decisions and surrounding himself with the wrong ppl. He followed his dream and now this is made out that it was the wrong thing to do and that he should have just followed his father's dream instead.
You shouldn't force your child to do what you want... let him have his own dreams. Now, this whole story is about him completing his father's dream and correcting his mistake of following his own dream instead.
This is just such a bad way to build the foundation of your story on and is rly hard for me to immerse myself as I dunno, it's just bad thinking.
Es muy mala... Durante la lectura me tuve que tomar pausas en cada capítulo para reflexionar si debería continuar leyendo, el cap 7 fue mí límite. La novela es muy forzada al máximo lo cual se deja claro con las barras de metal (quién se perfora el cuerpo con barras de metal, solo para verse mejor?) Es un Don el cual se puede desarrollar como un músculo no es totalmente necesario el uso de las barras, o como mínimo no de las grandes.