Another gem, honestly there’ nothing bad I can say about it except I need more
read 25 chapters. I've always loved and been a fan of yandere novels so it wasn't a big surprise to check this one out. in addition the mc just dumped his fiance and now anticipating how she's gonna regret it is oddly satisfying. anyways it was worth my time reading. keep working hard author sama and don't drop this masterpiece.
To be honest, there are two things you need to fix. Firstly, the use of punctuation for some of the dialogues, it'd be better if you insert commas.
Secondly, you always repeating the action but also including it in your dialogue e.g. He sighed. "Sigh..."
In this situation, if you already wrote the character's action, you don't need to express it in the dialogue because readers could tell the character was sighing
Honestly, it's rather boring. The first corpse the MC finds (the system practically dumps it on him) boosts his cultivation level to such an extent that he can easily take on well-established clans or sects. Yay, an OP MC- but wait, where did all the conflict go?
Raw .
Wow!! This is a nice story. Quite interesting. Sam is just a beast in human form. Why can't him allow small Jessy to rest? At least he's succeeded in taking her parents live, FCS he need to let her be. Any way, I'm yet to know what will finally happen to Sam since he's refused to give Jessy breathing space. How I wish Dave would play his cards well.....Jessy would be the happiest one ever
The book does not update. The book does not update. The book does not update. The book does not update. The book does not update waste money wasted money
Read until volume 2 so far. All I want to say is that this is definitely worth it to give it a try.
I rarely give reviews but I have to say I like how straightforward the volumes are without too many fillers and I think the author did a good job at the storytelling. Keep up the good work! <3
Well I'll continue reading here anyway, the site is designed in a way that makes reading faster and finding novels you like more efficient.
So true.
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This book.....I'm short of words. Firstly, the words, the way he matched them together...oh no! You're great. The characters are also good. I love this book.... expecting more from you soon