Alright. So a new review is needed. Especially since this is now developed into a pay and premium type story. However, of all the VRMMO stories on here, this is among the top worthy of SS. Some may say it’s just an ******* work, but it honestly stands above and apart many of the translated works. Here’s why: (yes it’s long cus it’s honest)1. The writing quality is excellent in grammar and spelling with tons of modern literature, video game and movie references that fit so smoothly and make the story enjoyable. Instead of being cliche it fits just right in the moment and makes you smile and laugh. The dialogue is not too lengthy as to be boring and yet always adds life to the characters and shows insight into their characteristics, histories and relationships. It is also consistent, even as the characters develop and change/grow the dialogue continues to match. 2. The updates are steady. While there isn’t a bunch of mass releases due to it being written practically live by the author, you get your daily fix and if you are that addicted then go privileged for a good headstart. As a written piece rather than translated piece this is by far the most important quality of the author. It shows dedication and that the story will not be abandoned anytime soon. 3. The story development is unpredictable yet natural, with a good mix of cliffhangers and plot twists. Good luck and bad luck are there in spades without the need for OP MC. Which is a refreshing break from all the rest of the VRMMO novels that are like clones. It has all the great elements of a VRMMO such as NPC realism/comedy, realistic updates/character nerfing (lol. Oh so real for online games) and bug management (because honestly if you are OPing someone game then AI/moderators should be looking at you which is biggest bull**** of most VRMMO), real interaction/consequences between game and life, not too bogged down in stats /game details, struggles both in game and in real life (some of which are beyond the MC control and capability to fix), romance without too over dense characters or super maxed charm and beauty for every character, lots of comedy without having to be overly dependent on face slapping (yes library of heaven path which was written on repeat every chapter), and most of all simultaneous story developments that twist, flashback keep you in a rollercoaster with a mix of pace that is easy to be comfortable with and doesn’t force events/development. 4. The character development is the only one I marked as 4, but that’s only cus the damn author made so many interesting characters that I’m honestly deep in anticipation of their development and future influence. Especially in RL. But of course RL moves slower than game cus RL is always just like that. The game characters however are full paced and well developed with just enough details to make them lovable but with the hidden potential to surprise you and become a plot development. Underestimate nobody. There is no cliche characters so far, although at the beginning it seemed like it might go that way. Honestly, it feels like the author development grew at some point and so did the characters or something. But he avoided potential pitfalls. Character relations also change a lot but in realistic ways as we would with ppl who we consider old/new to our lives. And there is character conflict both large and small. Lol. The scenarios they also end up in with eachother are a smooth flow as well as their reactions. The NPCs are so damn lovable and their is a clear distinction in the feel of the story between the MC with players and NPCs that neither one feels useless and that could be left out. I’m just saying that if you are a big addict to RL development then you may be a little frustrated. Lol. But it’s VRMMO story so that’s what it’s all about and that aspect will develop at a higher pace naturally. 5. I’m out of space. But it’s damn awesome. So get to reading already.
Its a good novel. Although some parts are really slow and some characters are really annoying... The novel has really good moments as well that make your heart race. Character development is fantastic. If I must point out a down side is that there are way to many fights and each can last many chapters. I recommend this novel!!
Another Jiang.... I wonder how big the Jiang family is. Dragon Marked war God's Jiang was a bit boring, but was legendary when he was with the yellow dog. Turquoise Pond's Jiang liked to hide his abilities buy always one shot his opponent when he decides to show-off. I wonder what this Jiang will do.
Read till 33 chapters. Novel has all the cliches, propaganda and bad writing of other novels. Did I say propaganda? Because this novel made me hate China. Novel has all the bad things about other Chinese novels, none of the good things, like humour, logic(somewhat), plot, etc. I can’t even stand 33 chapters, but 9500 chapters? No thanks. I don’t want my IQ to reach negative numbers.
The novel translation is back! what a good news! I hope this well stay until the chapter end! Please help support this novel so that it well stay being translated.
the MC should be very good in multiple choice ???it will full of slaping face (hard) scenes. just hope for the best from author, ????
I like the story and the movement of the plot line. He got the system - YesCompleting missions -YesSlow development - yes (probably because of chapter length is small)World development - No (hardly say anything about the place he live in. is it still earth or other?)character - under developed My only con of this story is MC character. He was doing odd jobs in university to do the living, suddenly ine day he got the system and become studious I can accept that but this also changes his character as a whole he become completely emotionless unless author want to create some comedic moment, he looks down on his friends for playing games and stuff like normal college students do (which he also do before system). one instance in recent chapter (as of ch. 122) he looks down on a Indian guy in princeton (whose friendly to mc) for doing some calculation error laughs on him saying wasting his funding coming all the way to princeton. In some sense without system MC would be passing down flyers in streets while that Indian guy even with calculation error is genuinely genius doing his presentation in princeton using reverse mathematics which no one uses even author agreed upon.All in all I want is MC should have some sense in the way he treats the people around and not act as guy whot billions in lottery and become a complete douchebag.And for Author please do not make stereotypes of all westerners you know. By reading this novel I know you are patriotic and thats good for you but MC is not you and you didn't set any consistent worldback ground to MC have a biased view other than using same same on earth.My overall impression : 2.8/5. This doesn't mean I don't recommend reading it but take it with a grain of salt.
Read 2 chapters, found it a lot entertaining. There were some time when MC self monolog ed a little too much but it didn't seem to make the story any less interesting. If you upload, I'll give you my stones. ?️☄️???
Best novel i have read so far ..action ,but mc does not always depend on luck (though is part of it) ,funny at some parts so it is not always boring kill and kill and kill ,best story development of any novel i`ve read so far ...i just wished he had met his mother by now ,but i guess ,every thing in its own time.
I really liked reading this and hope that you keep writhing more, i liked the part where he is grinding his skills...........................................
I'm dropping this novel. Don't get me wrong. this is one of the best novels on this site. And I really enjoyed it. Thanks Author.Unfortunately the writing quality went downhill approximately after the ch 800. fillers , fillers , fillers ... And I stopped enjoying the novelex: "Wei Wuyin's inward reaction was intense, heart racing, blood pumping, and muscle tightening"Thank you anyway for the ride.
Amazing story! keep it up