u are you in a det you are wrong about your house or your friends and the unicorns mostly in your life but they don't have a option for the last one or elders
This chapter keeps getting better and better I can’t wait tell the next chapters come out so please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thanks
Just a copy of a different novel almost word for word guy tansmigrates has no talent and becomes blacksmith and forges his own body , plagiarism
How come no one knows of this story its so damn goodplease keep the good work its really goodThe story development and the character design are damn good and as for the world background i mean you could have chose different names for the clans but nonetheless its good i really hope you don't drop this oh and i hope that you dont do a romance thingy between shui or whatever her name was i want MC to be a lone wolf makes him more darker hehe pun intended
Except for some grammer and punctuation mistakes the book is really good. It is easy to follow and had elements of humour. I like the system and the way they speak. Keep up the good work, btw bunny are scary based on your description, now I'm a bit afraid now.
I could only make it through chapter 16 due to the horrible writing/translating of the book. It just seemed to get worse as I read. I might be tempted to keep reading if the story was worth it, but it was not even close to it. From the beginning it is just a travesty. You get introduced to the MC as he get sneak attacked right after winning a competition in front of everyone which causes him to be a paraplegic and yet it seems that he was punished for it. His medical bills are so expensive that it causes issues for him even though he is the victim. Supposedly it gets hashed out at some point according to the author's review, but I didn't last that long.We get to the game which supposedly is super popular worldwide, but the MC knows nothing about it even though his sister has been playing it for some time. She gets him the helmet to play the game but doesn't tell him anything about it and the MC makes no effort to understand the game. There are inconsistencies throughout the plot and incorrect values for level and stats. It just stacks up.Good luck if you try to read it. You will need it.
I like this a lot but I cant read more because you are not uploading more chapters. So please request you to update more chapter's so I can read more
Garbage. Generic plot and tonnes of issues I really can’t be bothered to elaborate upon. If you have an OP MC, your story needs to have other qualities that entertain readers. For example, One Punch Man has lots of comedy, Overlord has super high quality world-building, characters and battle mechanics. This book has nothing.
This is a review from a guy who is only on chapter 14 but I just wanted to make this review to point some things out.1 - The main character is extremely OP and I like that but due to this the author added a personality trait I don't like which is arrogance.2 - All of the potential love interests the MC meets so far is lusting after him when he is 8 years old and they are at least double his age. Hell Jun Linglong was saying he was handsome at 3 (some of the background characters were envious of him as a 3 year old).The book is good. I'm not going to be the guy who says this book is bad just because I don't like something about it. The book is great and if you like cultivation novels and OP protagonists then this is a book you would like. I just feel really uncomfortable about some teenagers lusting over an 8 year old boy.
40+ chapters plot- MC awakens system, accepts disciple with awakened physique, gets a flower to awaken it. THATS IT filler chapters of maid tea contest and a whole chapter of a single conversation or the same thing repeated in 10 different ways
Starting from ch.390 = ch. 24 of The Most Generous Master.391 = 25, 392 = 26.. etc.The chapters are exactly the same WORD FOR WORD (names changed Ye Qiu is Ye Xuan).One author copied the other one.
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