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I just got bored, I wasn't for me, and I don't like musk, so seeing his last name again and again just irk me.
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Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?
Good book only that the beginning has Abit of problem...
Its good so far but im still waiting for some g re ammical errors to be fixed
The story is interesting and promising. The concept of the story is very detailed. Even the world that the author created is perfectly depicted. Easy to understand, but rich with flavour.All I can say is that it would be better, I think, if you can use less "he" and change it into something less redundant like "The naked boy," or "the Bloke" or something else. Aside from that, I find it very amazing to see this concept inside a doomsday world.
Hello. First of all, this story is not written by you. It is a popular story form India, written by Chetan Bhagat. If you want to spread the story, you should first get permission from the author & 2nd you should mention the name & give credits to the author. If you want to write a Fan-fiction, it's wrong pattern as well, as you just copying & pasting the original work. I implore you to either mention & give credit to the original author, or remove what you have uploaded here. It is a punishable offense & you could get sued by the author. Regards.
Good one having a interesting boy story with a different story which found me really interested. This boy having good bussiness mind setup and a good characteristics towards others
You deserve 5 ?I mean the quality is there from the beginning. The characters are interesting. The story is interesting too. I wasn't bored at all when I read it. In overall very good novel, would recommend. Keep up the good work, and don't stop. With more chapters, you will get more views and more reviews. It's a good story, so don't get discouraged. All the best ?
wow!!!what a novel. The blurb, It's really interesting, and I would love to read more.clap for your author.I love your work.keep up the good work.I would keep reading.
Love this story. Is innocent and very loving. Great job. I hope to get more frequent updates. In real life you get many couples as the main Fl and ML.
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