I assuming his is your first time writing, it's good. More effort needed, except MC, other character look good to me. Story need to slow and explained. World Background null, give it a time.
This novel is great. The mystery and the plot twists are amazing. I highly recommend this novel to people who like mc's with twisted personalities.
Here before this book shines!Simply a masterpeace. amazing writing quality. A hard working and amazingly overpowered mc.and a great world building. i especially like the magic concept here. the aether and nether, and how the mana is just a lower level version of these two. just amazing~~
MF really posted his Story onto iFunnyThe grind is real, and it never stops. ????????????????????????????????????
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*Does anyone know the name of this novel in Chinese/have a link to the raws please? :)*
I'm absolutely loving this novel. Read all of the 60 chapters and it's hilarious. I just wish the MC was a bit luckier for himself other than kneeling though. Worth a read imo. There are also no characters I really dislike and the MC has a very good personality and his friends are likeable.
Extremely freaking addicting I ended up using all my saved up SS and fast passes that I'm out now. It's different from others as it doesnt bother much with lvl
I really enjoy the idea of this book but I just couldn’t get over the grammar of it all. If that was fixed it’d be devouring this book. Top rating if fixed
It may not be the type of book genre that I'll read usually as I'm not really into management novels, but I really have to say that the author uses good grammar and suitable vocabulary at times and the the ideas are entertaining enough to make you continue reading.
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For an SAO parody...This isn't bad. The Kirito here seems better if you ask me. The VR logic is somehow vague for me at first but then I understood it after reading a bit far off onto chapter 20.But overall, This puts a smile on my face ;)
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