Nice story................................................good background.....................................................................................love characters
It was going so well, the story seemed serious, progress of MC was steady and then BHAM there comes a princess of a large clan that now hate our mc and focus shift from struggling in this new cruel world to how the clumsy attempts of MC talking to the princess.You completely changed the setting of the novel with that decision.
The concept is soemwhat interesting but there are some major flaws. First is the translation is garbage, one of the maids is constantly refered to as “HE”. The numbers for the system arent consisten. The rank of the MC keep changing randomly. The maids are nice but they are super OP so there is no suspense.
It's an interesting read with one of my fav concepts about an author reincarnating into his own novel, its always funny XD. I see that the author is also a fan of the novel's extra and must probably got motivation from it~ keep it up author!
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The story line seems to be pretty interesting so far. I am curious to see what's going to happen during the MC's journey. I know only 11 chapters are out so far, so I can't really do a complete review.There was a lot of explaining in the beginning, I'm guessing mainly just to rush the story along and get to the base of the story.Towards the last few chapters there were a bit more dialogues and it included the world a little more, so I like that aspect about it.Other than it starting out a little slow paced I thought this story seemed pretty interesting. Although the author did say it's meant to be a slow-paced novel.Keep it up author!
So far this looks to be a interesting story, the MC seems to be pissed about his whole problem not caring that he is the cause of the problem. It should be interesting to see where the writer goes with this.
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This is a great novel, mc is unique and the story is fun to read you don’t get boredMaybe more detail about the mc cultivation but it a great novel I recommend itGive it a try
This is an amazing novel, though the actual title should be "My master keeps breaking through at the end of his lifespan. " The novel is just about that - The MC has to live out the lifespan of every stage of cultivation, but he's guaranteed to break through. As he cannot cultivate, he gets to dabble deeply into auxillary methods, such as spellcrafting, puppetry, or alchemy. The novel is absolutely amazing, as it focuses on the life of a cultivator instead of cultivation. I haven't read it in a while, but from what I managed the author also makes sure not to bore reader to death by making MC stuck on a cultivation stage for 1k chapters.
Just like great mo, master mo is also a great gamer that I love!I'm waiting to see what will happen next, but so far, so good. Good job author, need more chapter!