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Great love the book just have more updates as soon as possible please.....................................................................…………..
Okay! hear me out, it was cool, to see the masaclere scene and i can imagine it on my head and the whole scenes, it was legit that the character will have a bad past
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This novel is written by a REeal Man of culture he is literary mc Love'N Catssgirlis all the chapters have been an amazing reading experience
This is a more recent review of my own novel. It's not joke review, and I would like to dedicate this to people who are interested in reading this novel.The start is a bit slow due to the worldbuilding, but worry not, things will kick in. You might think that there's a lack of action and romance at the start, but again, don't worry. Things will truly start to consistently progress after a certain torture scene.Anyways, this story is actually hardcore sci-fi disguised as fantasy. So I hope you guys won't mind if the story switches genres in later parts.
A novel inspired by Pokemon game, sure, let's see.MC is a trainer that regressed from his previous life full of failure, ok.Suddenly got the ability to evolve beasts by telling story.... wut? and all of them successfully evolved into OP beasts and become his loyal tamed beast? wut?Did you input cheat codes when starting this new game? And you expect it would be interesting?At least in Pokemon the MC starts from the bottom, and that what makes it exciting to play. The growth, the struggle, the adventure.You simply toss all of that out the window.Well ok, I'd throw this novel out the window too if I could.
The story is not consistent. In the first chapter it is mentioned that the MC and his sister are ordinary people without any talents. Though the MC's turned out to be true, the sister is talented in archery. Even the technology of the world is inconsistent. It is mentioned that there are cars and planes. But the MC travelled in carriage in 1 chapter. The names are also not to my liking. Go with western completely or chinese completely. I was not able to go past chapter 30 with that many plot inconsistencies.
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I find myself loving and hating this novel, it feels bad really bad but like when bad thing happens before the good it gets better but then turn bad again, anyways love the gate thing hate his growing strong slowly, when will his beasts evolve. And why does the enemy get to have 5 gates or will the NC kill one gate and get their ability.
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