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The writing quality is good. The story has all sorts of clichés. At least it's written well
The writing quality is top-notch; the MC is funny, so much that you can stop laughing while reading; the story is based on a popular theme, but reviews it in a fun and interesting way. To put it bluntly, even if there's only a few chapters, the story grabs your attention quickly and you can't stop reading. I recommend it!!! (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
Although there are a few contradictions in the background building, it's still a good story, that's got good potential. I hope author can make it a serious and durable project qith the help of editor-sensei.
** : I support the book
Beautiful beautiful beautiful beautiful beautiful beautiful beautiful beautiful beautiful beautiful. Where has this beeen all my life. The humor is great. Its a very mature book, yet it feels real and thats whats so great about. It doesnt feel serious at all like it usually would but at the same time it can be. Read for yourself to find out more!
is this dropped or the author is just a translator?
perpetually a fan of this author his previous 2 works are amazing. great quality,characters and world building. looking forward to the new work and will continue to support you
This novel is acceptable till 100 chapters. After that the charecters become more dumb, foolish and brainless. They cant even see the very obvious things. Those are just one dimensional charects created to cover up the fact that the story is very lacking in the aspects of creativity and good plot. The MC becomes a very lazy idiot - here this author tried to imitate the "monster pet evolution" book but ended up creating a useless low IQ trash MC. If you want to read it because you like the first 80-90 chapter, i suggest you dont but You will be very dissapointed if you keep reading. I am saying it out of personal experience (i read the remaining chapters in raw)
This girl/guy (Idk which) is like my favorite auther they wrote dreadful radio show which is one of my top 3 books of all time you never know what's gonna happen next a guy who seems crazy is normal a normal guy is a ghost a guy who's a ghost is alive it never stops
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The Grammar is so terrible. I was genuinely interested but just couldn't continue after chapter 2 so if the Grammar is not corrected, a story with such good potential will be hard to read
I was actually enjoying it some what before I saw him stay in the trash school just because of a ‘fiancé’ that left him to drown in the logistics department by himself. Like *****, call that marriage off at the very least!
He acknowledged that he didn’t have any feelings towards that school in the previous chapter but then changed his mind when he saw the ‘aura’ of the Fiancé. The aura of a bumbass, stinky ass 3-star teacher working in a sinking ship.
Glory my ass. Leave that *****! Her dumb ass knew he was facing trouble but didn’t do anything and then she had the audacity to try to keep him in the school. She didn’t even know that he was good at all! She just didn’t want to give him away! She hadn’t seen him in years and was surprised on how he looked.
I’m starting to dislike beautiful women in these types of novels. Like there was no good reason in why he stayed. ‘I want to prove to everyone that I’m not someone who needs a woman’. Like *****, go to another school and dominate that **** and show that you were under pressure or something and that’s why you couldn’t be a grand teacher.
Like **** that school. Fuck the Fiancé. And Fuck the grandpa that was the headmaster Of that school. Fuck! Fuck them all!
Dumbass female!
Fuck! I’m sexist now! LOOK WHAT YOU TURNED ME INTO!
I'm here again to explain everyone the greatness of the Heaven and the Earth *hmm I that was the line* :
So a great story where mc gains a system in game evolve in various monsters (even Divine beasts) or by transmutation to from new species for his minions and for himself and h gets a lottery system where gets good skills and even Divine skills ( Ch 11 or 12).
So read bro/sis so when it not in your hand you don't regret it...
