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The story is nice and cool but the character conversations are cringy beyond belief and they seem like being forced to be funny when it is not and the author portrays the mc as a smart calculating person when he is farthest from being one and is like a 5 year old in an adult body with how he acts with his allies and people around him
well I like this story and even the plot but the updating stability is truly bed it's been like one month since I am been waiting for a new chapter but there is still no update to it well anyway I wanted to ask if any of you seen the same kind of Novel like this in which a boy got a portal in his bathroom ( and this is for author bhai thoda jaldi karna maybe Punjab ke pass rahata hun aur mujhe yah story janni hai Tum Jo Tera Ghar Bata de main vahan a jaunga ya FIR upload karna shuru kar de no offence but thoda jaldi karo kafi time se vate kar raha hun itna bada review to maine jindagi mein nahin likha sirf tu ek pass Rahane wala isliye likh raha hun anyway agar tujhe dusre novel ke bare mein kuchh pata hai to batana ) well I don't know if you are from Punjab or not but I believe you are because you have used this novel if you are Indian you should understand what I have written
This is an amazing book I have read alot of books bot this one truely keeps you engaged reminds me of the time I reincarnated as a slime. It's a must read for fantasy world lovers.
The writing quality is really good thou there might be some grammar mistakes along the way. It has a good plot and character development. Try it and You'll Like It. ??
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Seems like something.The plot hasn't unfolded yet.Minimal holes which are easily skipped over.Future chapters may change my mind.Need more chapters
Interesting! I was never exposed to novels with the concept of ‘system’ so this was a great introduction. This story has potential and I’m intrigued to find out what happens next. Good job, author!
Hey author-San wanted to leave a review as well as a question I have…. First my question who is the main female lead, and the romance when we gonna see some development with Adam and whoever is gonna be is counterpart or even harem(which I am rooting for here HAREMMMM) (if you can answer that) Next my review as of chapter 32 I love the story so far honestly have no compliants if I had any it would be the “split personality/primordial Authorities” amazing concept just it needs to fleshed out a pit more for me
started decent but multiple things ruin it1 inconsistencies - MC refering to female characters as he etc annoying 2 the reason for the dungeons to appear just stupid - god lost interest, by putting in the god to your novel it removes any form of progression that MC could achieve through effort for example if you wrote a novel where you train day in day out to develop great power and strength then superman with 0 weaknesses and immortal turns up all efforts seems pointless 3 the reasons for demons desire to conquer utterly ridiculous - they know their greatest enemy could wipe them out with a thought yet still think they are high level beings
welcome back after few month i waitingnow new chapter has been release so i hope can read it every day after this if you not very busy i like when read it ecspecially tianchen because i love he character and i hope him be happy life and also be super power to protect himself and another person who he care about
it's not that bad as everyone say. ....,..........,...,................the mc might be stupid but i like the world background and story development.