About Plotting, Emipre building , Romance, Erotica, there are better books to read than this one .I won't recommend you to read this book, that's for sure.Massive amount of info dump since the first chapter.And the writings ticked me off. (i don't know the original writing is bad or tl is bad)It first introduce a minor character in detail (or his cursing) and then jumped into introducing his superior and then the top prisoners he is going to free one by one in detail( they are sidekicks of Oscar i guess).And jumped to a conversation between Oscar and his lackey Domingo.and then they talked about some random guy who suicide for his child to be on Amnesty Order and this Oscar dude interrogated the prison doctor like a boss. and he ate red trout like a boss which his maid prepared. And it became an introduction for Oscar's awesome bg family.he is nephew of emperor etcand vidvidly introduced his sister . And then Oscar remembeing his sister, he and his maid love scene.I was like wow wth. and chapter ended with warden getting trouble with Amnesty Order of Oscar. and cursing this: "O Neil! You damn fatty! Fat pig! You devilish dude. You son of a ***** that eats ****. Do you want to fill the world of the God of Light with sin? You are the most shameless, the dirtiest and the most disgusting trash I have ever seen! You... You... You…... What you really want is my life! Oh god! Do I have to turn my back on you now?"Wow I have no idea who the f is this o neil dude and chapter ended. Thank God it ended. I don't even want to know who the f o neil is after reading one chapter.I am so tired of reading this kind of writing.Now I am thinking Oscar is MC. But Synopsis clearly claimed that O neil dude who is mentioned twice in chapter one is MC. What to do?The lines are endless. Painfully endless.Reading them feel like I am at marathon.I dont even binge read, just read them leisurely but the conversion are so awkward. Info dump after info dump.I casually read other chapters and think their character development is awkward. and story development too, lol (Actually the characters have awesome backgrounds settings, like 90& of characters.)And the author like to write conversation among people and then bam, he explain for a 2/3 of a chapter why this is happening.If I have to nitpick, chapter names are lazy (First Episode: Chapter 1 First Episode: Chapter 6 etc)May be it is just not my kind of book. May be one man's trash is another man's treasure. :)
I absolutely love this story. I came from Scribble Hub where I started reading this when the first chapter came out, but school got in the way, and now I found it here. Glad to be back reading this gem
Ohhhh mythology and grand empires this are the things I wish to read?.............................................................
I know, shamelessly reviewing my own book. This 140 minimum charter count is ridiculous but then again a honest review would be longer then that so all good.
This is so cool! This is the story that I'll be rooting for until the end. I really love the simple details that I think the author had written with thorough research. For the author, good job on making the characters so badass that I remember the films I repeatedly watching.
A really well written story , which let's me immerse in the story. Unlike most stories the tragedy part is handled well. Where you actually feel emotions.P.S I would recommend the author to get a better cover picture
Basically my favorite series ever so u should read it
Okay, now I believe the main character did manage to kill the author of this piece after all, depriving us of the continuation of the story.
What a superb book. The main characters all have different perspectives, and through them you see the world. It is very philosophical in it's approach, and how it challenges each character. I look forward to it's continuation.
interesting story so far wonder if he will go back to his world with the dwarven system at some point his mother deserves something for all the trouble she went through him with a system to take care of her would be good and he did just die again as a dwarf
For short story, this story is quite entertaining. I like the development and the ending is good for all individuals.But overal, i like the story. Please keep writing. Thanks ???
In every chapter I was grinning crazily, it is sweet and so good. Am still in the early chapters and I gotta say, it is going to be a great story between Alayah and Aaron. Love it!