Im having some problems finding yours here's mine bro Lightning531#9630
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The chains holding Falicia down started to give off a bright light and suddenly exploded into butterflies, freeing her from her imprisonment. The shining, white butterflies rushed towards the ball and transformed it into more butterflies. Soon a swarm started to swirl around and in the center stood Sakura, smiling with her arms wide open. "Come, take your first step into the light."
She was beginning to think he was stalking her. Whenever she wanted to do something, he always showed up.
Oh ho. Welcome children. As you enter, you will read of a world full of, well, sticks. Beware, you will enjoy this story so much that, you yourself, will want to become a stick as well. (°∀°)b Best of luck.
"Everyone, let's give her a few hours to recuperate. Perhaps she'll be out of her daze by then." (Joy)
here is a review.......................
It has good potential, a cohesive and very fluid story, which doesn't give the impression that the author is pushing the protagonist.It's worth reading.
In my opinion for author I think it can be improved ( by balancing the cultivation and the romance/harem)
This novel is a breath of fresh air! I’m so tired of the hyper-paced stories crammed with unbelievable cheats and over-powered systems. This book gets it right with its deliberate pacing, allowing the world and characters to truly breathe. The main character is perfectly grounded and relatable, making his journey all the more engaging.What truly sets this novel apart is the attention given to the side characters. Unlike so many stories where they fade into the background, here they feel like fully realized individuals with their own motivations and stories. They add depth and richness to the narrative, making the world feel incredibly real and lived-in.And finally, while I know the story might be heading in a different direction, I can’t help but root for Sister Gu! The connection between her and the MC is juts right, and I’m holding out hope that she will become the main love interest. Regardless, this novel has definitely earned a spot on my favorites list!
Your story is amazing! I love the characters as well. Chris is so unique. I like unique characters, so there's that. You get drawn with the lots of drama too! Continue writing, author!