Come on man, your locking chapters that have already been translated by someone else behind a paywall with no guarantee that you are going to be translating any further. At this point, I am nearly sure that you just used the other translator's work and tweaked a few words here and there for every chapter.
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Where have the novels where protagonists are actually talented gone?The character design is yet again a prince who has been sent to the cold palace, and also has a check-in system. The world building is lazy, directly coming from the protagonist spouting what he has learnt from history books, and the story development follows this type of story, static, and fairly dull. I've grown tired of "System" novels and the lack of any real setbacks or events that lead to emotional attachment. The fact that the protagonist is simply given limitless power does not sit well with me.Average, repeated plot, boring novel.
Great novel, its definitely one of the top 10 on webnovel.nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
enthralled the emotional events and responses shown by the characters introduced in the novel really exciting
Story plot is really good as well as the writing and pace of the story. Although more details about the characters will enhance the story but over all its wonderful read..I think synopsis should have been a bit more descriptive so that it hooks up the reader.But keep up the good work dear author.:)
Excellent story, If you start reading you cannot stop.Keep in mind with few words miss used like (I & He & She). Zhou Fan character sloving one crisis to another is just amazing and showing the leadership of the emperor.
For everyone who is currently voting for this novel pls. Don't waste it in this because it will never be pick ed up by quidian so use your power stones in othee novels. For those who really want to read this novel go to WW.(W.uXla-----WORLD)
There are quite a few issues with this story. First and foremost is how absolutely slowly it moves. By chapter 20, the story has barely even begun, and it took about 11 chapters to reach what should have essentially been the first. This feels like a result of you going into extreme detail about backstory and world building before even giving the reader a chance to care about your characters. These are things that should have been introduced gradually, and less forcefully, as the story progressed, not all at once at the beginning.You also have a tendency to over explain things a lot. This not only takes up 200+% more words than you need to, it gets very tiring to read.The grammar is okay, but not great. You use "!!!!" and "???" and chatroom-like syntax, and it makes your story come off as if written by an overly excited teenage girl (which may be the case, I don't know).Your dialogue tends to be heavy eye-roll material as you often use it for exposition, making your characters come off as robotic and unrealistic. Backstory should not be forced into dialogue. It kills a story. And you've done that /a lot/ in yours, and right from the start as well.You've got a few interesting ideas and some potential, but the way you write seriously needs an overhaul. Spend a little time reading better written works, see how they do things and try to reach where you are at Ch20 in 2-4 chapters instead.Good luck.
Solid three this a great read for noobs, but only newbies. Need more work too much description dialogue that is easily forgettable........................
This is an incredible story. The elements that form it are humble, and the archetypes that drive it forward are familiar. Yet as you read on, you watch the author take these ****** pieces, and give them a life and beauty rarely seen in any novel.The characters are interesting and layered. The world and society are well thought out, and well expressed - this isn't the tale of a shapeless protagonist slashing his way through every challenge. The MC is but part of a grander story, one significant piece among many, each striving and struggling to accomplish their own goals and motivations. There is a richness to both the character development and world building. Even as you recognize each familiar archetype, you come away *satisfied* by the fullness and depth the author fills in each element. Parts of the story are pure poetry, written with true artistry and a sublime sense of storytelling. This is one of those rare works that make you feel like you have stepped into another world, where the backdrop is more than just painted facades and the side characters are more than a handful of lines on a page. The author manages to capture that fleeting, powerful feeling - the impossible belief - that if you could somehow peek into each alleyway, sidestreet, side-story or side-character.... you would find a fully realized life, moving and acting on its own.Way of Choices captures the essence of what makes a choice interesting. Namely, that we all want things, and sometimes getting those things means giving up something else. Every character in the story wants /something/, and all of them - not just the MC - have difficult or costly choices to make.As a reader, I hope you choose to give this story a chance. I believe you will find that beneath the familiar surface, waits something that is altogether special.
Boring parody of Profane Prince of DominationIt took the author 200+ chapters to finish the story in the first city. (It was very boring)if you want a strong MC this book is not for you, you better re-read Profane Prince of DominationThe number of power stones shows that this is a very sad story.