severely disappointed so I give you a happy little 1 star for ruining the story in less than 10 chapters . and now I'm filling up space so I can post.
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I have a policy of giving a 4 star review on update stability if I have no idea about it so forgive me since the rating may be wrong.
Moving on the plot is pretty interesting and the characters are extremely fleshed out so it seems like they don’t have impossible personalities (as far as a dude going mentally back in time goes) compared to a certain 10 year old kid that has no concept of weak attributes (ahem*Ash*ahem) with his overly optimistic personality. Anyway the present group of characters as of chapter 10 have some great dynamics when they interact.
World building is really good as far as 10 chapters go (and I haven’t seen an info dump yet so that’s a plus) and the plot can either be quick and sweet or long and satisfying with how many plot points the 2nd-4th chapters have.
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Writing Quality, it turns out Raven is not a talking bird... It is a bit abnormal to have a female name, as a male MC... 1 Capital letter in his first chapter! no not lying its true.
He has more capital letters in his review than his first chapter...
Writing Quality, it turns out Raven is not a talking bird... It is a bit abnormal to have a female name, as a male MC... 1 Capital letter in his first chapter! no not lying its true.
He has more capital letters in his review than his first chapter.................
Stability of updates, sense the novel has just started, no comment.
but sense each chapter is about 300-500? words and he wrote 6 total
2/3 chapters a week? that is extremely slow....
story development.. It might be there, but I cant really understand what im reading, so you get a 3
Character design... I thought your MC was a talking bird, somehow you made him less interesting to me... two poor kids, which no goal or objective, its pretty empty---- I made the same mistake.
World Background-- its a bit to early and his chapters are too small. id give him a 4 sense, I see signs of it being thought out.
I’m on chapter 17 and I have to say I’m really loving. The pacing is really good, not to slow or to fast. We already know a lot of stuff of the class but it’s still a bit of mystery. Overall an enjoyable read so far.
Oh my gosh like I don't even know where to startlike the book is giving off a cool vibe buy when Auto died and Nori came in,it wasn't as fulfilling. it felt like something was missing.But really.,diagnosis Auto really need to die?
This is the best Basketball book I seen man just want to say that hope you keep going only regret is that it's not where he could've played Lebron and Kobe in there primes ???
ooh its good alright although they are few mistakes am hoping the author would work on especially in the spellings
like this story!
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add to my library, but please fast updating for author
I think it will be a good read .
I am optimistic about this .
So far, this nobel has been really enjoyable the only complaint I have is the length of the chapters otherwise its a 5/5