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This book is a rare gem. Was really lucky to find it. The descriptions of things and story telling are off the charts. Super good. Very interesting.
Esta novela es divertida e interesante. Realmente reí cuando leí la ultima parte de la sipnosis. Espero que la historia no se arruine mas tarde.
This novel is fun and interesting. I really laughed when I read the last part of the synopsis. I hope the story will not be ruined later.
interesting story. Keep up
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love the book, the story development is kinda slow but the world the mc lives in is incredible and i think the book is going places,
i would recommend this novel to others,
so give it a read and great job author!!!!
I love this novel. The fight scenes are simply wonderful and easy to follow while complicated at the same time. The concept behind the story is like a breath of fresh air. Even the occasional typos don't reduce it's beauty. I WANT MORE
i tried boys, i did, i tried so hard to keep reading but i just could not keep going. I am the type of person that can keep readying if there is really bad grammar, and even if there are allot of plot holes. But i cant stand when Authors give there MC's an op background and nerf them just to make the conflicts they have more interesting.
In this case i hate the fact that The author says that the MC has an IQ of 260. And before he reincarnated he was 26 years old. So he should be really smart right? he shouldn't act like a child right? he should think things through before acting right? nope! he does none of that.
He gets upset when his mom treats him like a kid, when he is one in his new world. You would think he would realize that his mom does not know he has the mind of a 26 year old( or should have, since there's times he acts like a kid)
He adopts a kid and his sister who is sick on the spot for no reason at all and makes them his lil bro and big sis.
He treats every one like there his best friend and they have known each other for years. Even though there is people that want him dead, and he knows that because he was poisoned by those people, so you would think he would be cautions of new people right? But hes not.
Chapters also drag on and on, The author did mention that this novel was going to be like 2000 chapters i don't know why. Now i could understand if he was actually slowly building up the technology. So of course it would make sense to have allot of chapters. But most of the chapters are basically filler, because theirs like 10 chapters of his knights training. Nothing to do with building his city up, just lots of chapters of them doing training drills. Like the author could not give us a quick synopsis of what there training was?
I know there are people that like it, and if the MC wasn't so dumb, when he should be crazy smart. Even with all the chapters that feel like filler, even with the bad grammar. I would probobly really enjoy this, But the more i read i keep thinking "he's so F**king stupid, why is he so F**king stupid". And I am just not enjoying reading it.
You know a novel does not have your attention when you start to skip chapters.
I couldn’t bear it. I forced myself to read as far as possible because of the author and other reviews’ assurance that everything would be everything would be explained around ch 80 but i could barely make it to ch 43. I just hate janus (the system) with a passion. I liked most of everything else (the only female interaction that i liked was the stab victim and ive only seen her once so far). And the male characters also dont seem to be treated well. But the concept seemed extremely interesting and i was curious to see what the true story behind what happened was. I really really wanted to reach the part where everyone says it gets good but I practically had to force most the chapters down. If i have to struggle through 80 chapters just to get to the good part then i cant say this is a particularly attractive novel.So i have to drop it. Maybe someone with more perseverance and willpower will make it through and reach the goal, that person might actually find a really good story at the end of that road. Unluckily that wont be me.
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Really enjoying the authors work so far. I like how he tries to explain his process and thought process for the development of the main character. Some more details of how expansive the world is would help understand the scope. Learning through the eyes of a low class citizen who is learning more of how his world works helps ease into things without being drowned in detail.
Very nice..... More chaps pls....... Can you do the D.I.C.E world after this...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The story had potential when I first read started reading it but the author only overemphasizes the tragedy of the novels setting. There are no ups to the story. There is only a an ever spiralling depression. Nothing ever works out for the MC so none of the tragedies really mean anything after awhile. When the MC sees the 20th child being eaten by cannibals it gets old. The plot is non existent and none of the characters matter because they all die or are left behind fairly quickly. Overall there are a few novels that i don't rate well but this is once of the only ones I regret putting the time into reading. maybe I have stopped too early at around chapter 400 but so far its been a chore getting this far.