I enjoy the smart MC. and hiw je slowly understands thé bosses plans. Though there are too Mans battues without enough real lire interactions
I found this was a pretty neat boom at first. Tried reading it, grammar isn't the best but it's understandable most of the time, not all the time. The plot seems to be extremely vague, MC's personality change between his death and reincarnation get glossed over, the interactions feel forced, fake, drawn out. the characters are pretty forgettable, and the 'emotional' moments just aren't. made it to chapter 26 until the story was completely lost on me. Stuff that seems like it should've been a big deal happened like it wasn't.
When i first start reading this book i didn't expect this kind of quality of story. then on new year, i buy subscribe on patreon, and read it all in one day) after 305 chapters i can only say that it still one of the best books that i read.
The main character is immortal as well as a warrior as foreshadowed on the cover art. So some OP aspects are to be expected from a long lived warrior. This author has the potential to produce a standout original story, much more so than other stories on this app. If you're tired of OP MC with a cheating system, cultivation, transmigration, reincarnation theme. This novel is a breath of fresh air and deserves some recognition as such. Happy reading.
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Hey webnovel why did you suddenly remove this book from voting pool last week after not releasing it for months, picking it over newer novels, why even put it in voting pool if you may randomly delete it with no warning? Will someone else pick it up someday?
It seems to be dropped
It's actually a great and fresh concept, it gives me a cool vibe and the cover seems really cool to me and the future sensation plus the religious person thing I have also started some of my novels like this, really do wish the best for you!
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I Will be honest I can not give an impartial review of this novel as Author is my friend. Therefore, this review is only for showing my eternal support to him. Keep going Author, we support you.
And as for readers, I hope you give one try to his work for sure.....
I've read the whole 40 chapters of this thing, and hoo boy is it bad. And boring. (TLDR at the end)
First of all, if you're expecting some excitement, action, romance, anything of the sort, it's NOT HERE. This is strictly a slice-of-life. I have no idea how this author manages to dodge every other genre except for, Idk, wish fullfilment?? Which is also interesting since the wish fulfillment part is not really all that satisfying.
Story goes like this: MC gets money. Buys something. Steals from other guy. Buys something, etc, etc. Also, there's the occasional hook thrown here and there, only to be beaten up and abandoned in an alleyway somewhere. Why set up all these plot lines if you're just gonna throw them away?
Every single character is one-dimensional. All the girls are caricatures. Beautiful caricatures, mind you. Plus, I don't get why the author feels the need to add all these beautiful figurines, then proceed to shy away from making the novel a harem. How, you ask? Simply by forgetting about the characters you spend 4-5 chapters reading about. I mean, aside from MC and his family, everyone's in danger of being abandoned.
The system in this novel (yes, there's a system) is probably the most arbitrary, convenient piece of shit system I have ever read since Ultimate Scheming System (at least this novel fully embraces its trashiness and proceeds to be entertaining).
If I had only one thing to say about the novel, it would be "waste". Everything feels like a waste. Waste of words, of characters, of a premise. Of time. And that's the largest crime a webnovel can commit. Making the reader feel like it's a giant waste of time.
TLDR: Cluster**** of ideas author doesn't follow through with. Leave and don't look back.