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This novel is interesting. Definitely better than most trial reads. We have a good world background and story development. I usually write super long reviews where I thoroughly analyze the novel,but I won't do that this time.Give it a try and decide it for yourself. Not everyone will like it. You will feel that the execution of the story is not the best sometimes. I'll definitely read it because this novel can keep me entertained. I expected better when I first saw this novel, but I still like it. It just hurts me that such a good story got blended with Chinese things such as Tang dynasty and other chinese elements. I hoped for a full original story...
Mediocre with cringe sprinkled on it.The writing was decent until the trainwreck of POV shifts that popular novels suffer from. From there, we get the repetition of events, but with slightly more info from another character. At times, the grammar suffers. There can be run-on sentences and the descriptions sometimes repeat themselves too.Example: “Most of them preferred to hunt though, it was the most honorable type of work in the tribe, hunting down beasts and protecting your family was an honor for these people.”Fixed: “Protecting your family was an honor for these people, but most of them preferred hunting down beasts, which was the most honorable type of work in the tribe.Suggested: “Most of them preferred hunting down beasts, since it protected their family, which was the most honorable type of work in the tribe.”The updates look to be regular, with 9 or less page chapters.The story looked promising until it hit the brick wall of the tribesmen. Instead of heading to the city and getting ready to build up his sect, he helps random people and stays with them. Cue the pages and pages of backstory for them and then how they feel. If the author wanted a more organic story, he could have the MC ask the tribesmen for their story, instead of being forced to switch to the tribesmen’s POV and tell us. Show, don’t tell. Like, you could’ve had an emotional moment with that young tribesman by having him cry about his suffering. Instead, we watch like voyeurs on National Geographic.With characters, the MC is pathetic. There should be a missing “comedy” tag, but it’s cringeworthy to watch. He has all this power and is reduced to idly standing by. Like wtf? When he was following the tribesmen, why tf did he disappear? So many unnecessary conflicts happen. The other characters are described, but you can’t really care about them since it reads like an infodump. It’s the problem of telling instead of showing.The world background is just there in between forced reoccurring gags that the MC is dumb or messes up.
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Genuine peak what can I say? Also when is the next chapter/volume coming out. I can’t wait for the next chapter man oh god finished the anime and now the light novel could safely say that this will be my top 5 if not top 3 right now
Has potential. The beginning though is a little confusing. Other than that though it seems pretty interesting. I am interested to see where the story goes
I remember reading this back in 2017-2018 back when I'm browsing for some good novel similar to Eliza-sama. During those days, I don't bother to create a webnovel account since I'm not keen on using it (but now I'll definitely use webnovel more since wattpad sucks nowadays). I have to say, I read this once again for the memories and yup, it's still as good as I remember. I was hoping for similar book like this where the female lead focus on their own survival while having a realistic outcomes because I'm a sucker like that.
Following a cunning and sometimes merciless MC through a detailed MMO/RPG with the help of a novel hack, I enjoyed my time reading through this. I like how it portrays how mobs/bosses react in a chat group to normal players killing them
it’s just the same story type that all chinese author make with no developing interest at all. the story is about a dude from the number 1 and greatest country china, big shock and only seeks to glorify it. it little about the story and all about china. maybe more think and original story telling instead of copy/paste junk.
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too much blatent plot armor and occassional inconsistencies that break immersion. MC leaves his overseer for loli as new overseer who was conveniently deaged by a material or skill or something which is wrong in many ways.
This book is going to be one of the Greatest. I feel it might even become a comic. I see the Autbeing approach by Directors to make this into a movie even. I would pay to watch something like this.