Really great read. I'm sad it disappeared from the trial. Hoping for more! The world building is stable and the characters feel believable. It feels much more balanced and thought out than Gamers of The Underworld.
its a good novel, dont drop
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Really like the stories premise, enjoying it greatly so far. Hopefully it gets to the future where the alluded to importance of the game is revealed.
Control your power authorr... if scientists get the scent of your amazingness, then they will surely take you away for experiments !
It's just an amazing book! It's super deep and super thought out!
I don't even know how to describe it, just go and read this absolute gem! GO!
The title basically sums up the novel you're going to read. The author brings you philosophical questions to think about, and talks about his own opinion. I like it when my brain is thinking of these in another perspective. Kudos to you, author.
the start screams beginner writer
so you should fix that
and also I recommend talking about a topic for longer than:
1chpt back in time
2chpt meeting......
3chpt attending.....
4chpt reaching .......
5chpt meeting betrayer
6chpt revenge
7chpt going back
Hey guys, author here. This novel will start out with Xianxia, but there will be elements of Fantasy throughout it. Later on Science Fiction will also be added.
The MC will not have a cheat like skill, everything he does will be doable by any other character. The only advantage the MC will have is his life experience, and the knowledge he brings with him from Earth.
I hope everyone enjoys it. New chapters coming soon.
I have read the first few chapters and I can say is that the story is very interesting to read. Though I am not sure of the writing quality as it could use a little better. I highly suggest to use grammarly to improve your writing quality. All in all it has a firm plot and good characters.
Thanks for the interesting story
currently my favorite novel even with how with how little chapters there are I hope you continue with this novel because it looks promising
Author your ideas and conyepts are really good and unique in this novel but maybe its because of grammar or those weird mix words that disrupts the pace and likeness of this novel.
62 ch
5 stars~!
First of all, stability of updates. 2ch per day. No comments.
Second of all, writing quality. It`s fine. ˙ᵕ˙
Splendorous world background. I already like it. Seemingly inspired by LOTM but quite original.
Good character design.
Story development. Fine... but... maybe too long? For example, Nysa's parts show the story from a different perspective. It`s good but just too long. I am not really interested in her pov, so (in my opinion) the length needs to be reduced a bit. (づ ᴗ _ᴗ)づ♡
And... the pace of the story needs more speed. Also, we have more chapters about others characters than the protagonist, which is not very good.
The protagonist seems kind of smart. But he is a bit too emotional/impulsive sometimes?
Also, I'm not a weirdo who wants the main character to be a chaotic evil murder hobo, however I don't like irrational characters.
If, let's say, there was a ritual requiring some innocent people to be tortured for secret knowledge. And the protagonist wouldn't use it because he "has standards". I will be a little... disappointed. (╥﹏╥)
However, despite everything, this story deserves 5 stars.
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