In the abyss of novels...
Beginning of this novel is little blend but letter its good.....i think!!!
Jesus the formatting is terrible, the story is decent and a good time waster, but my god the formatting….
LIKE YOUR ENGLISH? LOL
I absolutely love this novel! The characters are so well-developed, and the plot keeps me on the edge of my seat. Every chapter leaves me wanting more. Please update soon! I'm eagerly waiting to see what happens next. This story is truly captivating, and I can't get enough of it. Keep up the amazing work.
first time seeing a cricket novel here ,its pretty good so far. definitely give it a try if you are a cricket fan though you might find it a bit dramatic.
I really like how you took inspiration from overgeard and put your own spin on it.
Very fun read
A very well-written and immersive dark fantasy setting. The lore at the beginning does a good job establishing tone and I was quickly taken in by the story. This author excels at creating atmosphere, and weaves the theme and all essential story elements together with the masterfully. A delightfully dark read.
So many unnecessary words.
The grammar is terrible, the plot itself makes no sense, the main character is just extremely unlikeable, and the author can’t seem to stop saying things that don’t even need to be said.
I mean, Jesus. If the main character makes toast, the author would give an extremely detailed explanation as if babies are reading this. The author is clearly trying to seem smart, wise, and philosophical, but it comes off as annoying, especially when it completely breaks the immersion.
One second, the main character will be having a conversation, and in the next second, he’ll start talking to himself for half of the chapter just to come to a single conclusion.
No offense but this novel shouldnt be even here in the first place and shouls be sued. literally a copy paste of another novel called( My Wife is a beautiful ceo) i dont know why on earth you support plagiarism. goes to show you dont read the novels you allow in your platform.
seemingly heavily inspired by reverend insanity.
when I saw the synopsis, I immediately got a review and gave this slump novel 5 stars because that's how it should be.
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