Pretty good so far, no he didn’t just “forgive” his ex wife. After gaining power he found out they kicked him out and in such a way that he would hate them so that he would have nothing to do with them and their enemy wouldn’t try and harm him. he found out and decided to look after them anyway. He wasn’t cucked or anything.
Well it was good at first. City transmigrate to new world in middle of forest filed with goblins/gnomes. All humans get taming books to tame monsters, everyone starts from weak monsters. The story was fresh and funny to this point then MC gets golden spoon and it all go ... MC can fuze killed monsters to upgrade his own for example he starts with goblin so after killing 2goblins and fusing their spirit with his own he gets Hoggoblin that is many times stronger than his original goblin. Its just too op when you look at it in long ran so im dropping it.
网恋女友竟是九天神凰 the raw
This novel is trash.
Too many fake reviews.
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so in summary,
grammar= 1/5
everything else= 5/5
The story is wonderful, the characters have depth.
the grammar is a godless afront to mother nature
nice
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The plot caught my interest... hope it continues....Happy Writting
this novel is amazing overall it has an amazing storyline with great characters to go along with it and the way it plays out makes you wanna know what will happen next in total I suggest you read this.
No originality, no characterization, no fun.
Most of the chapters i have read (about 50 in MTL) are mostly based on everyone spending their time being in awe of the MC, that is, if they are not just commenting about its greatness and how surprising and mysterious he is. And all that while he is posing to the choir as the great controller of fate. Boring...
The truth is that there is little more than this to the "story" chapters that i have read, so i feel that i should not expect more in the following.
The plot is interesting.
The writing quality is good, but still needs some work. Story develops nicely so I had no problems with that. I would like to see how Shade's character goes on in the story(the way he thinks etc.) Over all good work author!
You have a very solid base, that can make your story progress from where it is now. Word choices, structure, delivery and writing quality is good. Keep it up!
I really am a sucker when reading zombie apocalypse! This novel kinda reminds me of left four dead, so I expect a lot of great things here in the novel and its succeeding chapters. However, there are some points I'd like to discuss.
You need to establish the virus and its background. How it was created. Who created it. When did it started. Although you could start with the apocalypse right off the bat, someone must explain what happened and what are zombies. Zombies are undead creatures that we all know and love, but you still need to explain what are those walking corpses and add something out of it.
Grammars and such can be learn so I'll leave that part out of the way. Kudos for the author!