this is a l fan-fic why are the chapters locked. I have never seen a fan-fic where I need to unlock chapters. well it was a good story while it lasted.
THANKS AUTHOR FOR THIS GREAT NOVEL ......... well that's it and i love this novel by~~
I like the story. The way it is being portrayed is well done. Its World Background and Character Design is quite unique from it's counterparts in Webnovel. The Story Development is progressing good, I can see where it is going. Writing Quality is not the best, but it's fine. Just a few improvements in some parts would be enough or just improve in the latter chapters would be alright.
It has a great beginning, the story itself is amazing and the characterization is beautifully done, I appreciate your work. I would like to read more of it, keep writing more.
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After i read a few chapters i really like your story. your theme really got me interested to read more chapters. but if i can critique your book, there are some misspellings in terms of punctuation. I hope that in the future it will be better
Hello author here , am writing this novel during free time , if your wondering why I am going fast pace is because I like making my characters op , plus no harem , no cheating in relationship stuff like that, I really dislike cheating relationship, and thanks for reading if your reading my novel! God bless you all!!
it was an okay story till chapter 11 when i got to chapter 11 i couldn't even tell what the **** was going on anymore and thats pretty bad for a novel
normally i dont really read comedy n i dont know if this novel has a comedy tag or not but let me tell you this is the first comedy novel that ive ever EVER enjoyed id love to gift you something for your hard work but im really poor sorry
This has got so much potential yet it physically pains me to sometimes even read it. MINOR SPOILER :So basically, we have a child who's the youngest awakened mage and started training earlier than everyone else in both his archery and magic. He spent years fighting beasts in one of the most dangerous places in the world alone and fought all kinds of beast for years without rest while training and finally when he's around 10 or so years, the author just bombards us with information that his two cousins are now more powerful than him. They're more powerful in ranks compared to the one who awakened at the youngest, had best talent and practiced everyday just like that?The normal age for awakening is around 11-13 according to author yet his 12 year old cousins not only awakened early but are also better than him somehow. Also the sheer number of times he cries while missing his family gives a vibe that he's absolutely not a 40 year old reincarnate. I mean even a normal child wouldn't cry every other chapter or will have tear in his eyes every time talking to someone close. I've read close to 150 chapters and even though i really like the world building and want to read more, it's getting considerably harder to read it. Will the story continue this way throughout the novel ?
una muy buena novela espero que siga así ???.......................................................................................................................................
the whole book should be here , very disappointing for the fans. why keep us waiting