Not amazing, but certainly not bad. It didn’t really grip me, this is likely due to the writer being new and thus less able to engage the reader. However, the grammar was fine and the pacing thus far is pretty decent. I also enjoy the premise, and thank god for no system or wishes. Will be interesting to see if the author can keep up his writing and make this story into something special.
I wish the author would pick up this novel. It's great!
Not worth the read, wasted time to read 200 chapter. His cultivation is extremely slow, he's also arrogant and always know to make trouble to other people and as for his "so called" system sigh.. Only creating enemy without resolving the source.
The end is just rushed apparently, anyway not worth it.
it's quite good. different from the mc being powerful but doesn't know. here he isnt powerful.
Raw????
This is one of the 4 novels I read in this site.This novel is super awesome and I am really enjoying reading this.It gives me some good laugh and I am really happy that it got translated by a good translator.
Good story. Not going to write a more detailed review because I hunger for the raws!
there's not much to go on right this second but it's got the groundwork to be something better than a lot of other things I've read so I can't wait to see where you go from here
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Get picked pls
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I actually really like this one and Is probably my favorite of any of the other stories I've read from you. I do hope you eventually continue it.
I love the MC and the original succubus. Unlike in " A Fox's system" Or your rewrite of "A Fox's Systems" I feel the banter between the MC and the Succubus to be a lot more natural and funny.
The story seems to progress at a rate I am really satisfied with and I like that there does seem to be actual story arcs with some consequences such as the end of Ch. 10.
I do like that the story doesn't seem to be afraid of violence and death. It's also kind of fun and amusing watching the innocent MC turn into a ***-fiend against her will.
I am also glad that we got the one and all holy YURI! Oh, how I've dreamed of it. I am kind of hoping that the two girls become companions and that follows the MC as she travels. I even like the idea that eventually the MC has them heal and bring her body back to her parents or that something happens such as the Succubus possessing her former body.
This is also a type of story I've been wanting to read for years. Overall I am a fan of this and do hope we get more.
G'day friends! Here's a 5 section review for Flare's novel!
Writing quality: Great writing. The grammar is good, and there aren't any spelling errors.
Stability of updates: Batch released chapters as opposed to daily updates, which works for me!
Story development: The story is developing slowly and with a lot of slice-of-life. The attention to detail is great, but the pacing is a lot slower than in most novels. Great for a slower read, but the excitement is a bit more spread out.
Character design: The characters seem interesting, and have a lot of detail behind them. That said, a lot of characters are introduced very fast, (in the intro chapter) to the point that it is difficult to even tell which side they are fighting for. I'm sure that we will get to know the characters over time, but having so many new characters being named all at once was a bit confusing.
World background: Has a lot of detail, and based off the end of the intro, there will probably be quite a lot of interesting stuff set up in the future!
well here is my honest opinion story isn't that bad as some people are saying but it also isn't a masterpiece it's something of you can read to pass time
about MC personality he is enthusiastic yet braindead he wanna do great things but is coward. Overall society is trash if you don't have powers you are trash a lot of social status differences and a few things here and there doesn't make sense still I am writing this review after reading early chapter I think it has potential but whether or not author perform good or not who knows