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Great novel, has high potential and isn't as predictable as many others of it's genre are. A joy to read and is very entertaining.
I would like to request the author to post more often, not twice everyday but maybe a extra chapter if the novel gets over 50 votes in a week. (Yes I just want more chapters. Fight me.)
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Fuck!!.. Whatthe heck is this? , is this translation or raw. Just delete this book #webnovel.
I really dont understand a single thing in it.
Who **** is the translator, im really ganna beat the **** out of him/her.
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This is my second comment about this novel. Just finished Volume 1. It is easily one of the top novels in the original section. You can feel the LOTM influence especially during the scenes where MC is thinking a lot. But, at the same time only real talent can let you write this. This story develops in it's own way and I'm so happy for that.
love it bro, it has potential,
I am really impressed. You took current pandemic as a backdrop and made awesome plot around it. The concept is worth appreciating.
The pace of the story is perfect so is the writing. Perfect description of the environment setup and less to none grammatical mistakes.
I am looking forward for new chapters and will continue with the rest till then.
Thanks! :)
A novel I'm eagerly looking forward to read. The way author has potrayed the background, it's just awesome!
Will surely recommend others to read as well and give it a try!
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Author, update more fastly!
We can see the influence of several novels in this story and it still have its own originality, its in fact a good reading.
The story is narrated in the point of view of the MC with very unique since I cant remenber any other.
The only flaw I have to point is that the author is stingy with the details. If the story take a few lines to describe events like how the magic awakening occur or when he enter an place discribe it briefly the novel will be even better.
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I catch myself peeking if there is an update few times a day .Really well written great grammar and the story is smooth and gets you hooked . ...i really hope that the inner monster situation will turn up to be domination of stronger will (kinda like in bleach )anyway cant wait for what will author bring .(I'm really loving it so I'm gonna stay with "author" till the end)
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