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A good novel, I like it and probably will become one of my favorite books(maybe, who knows?)
I dislike the introduction of more women that has signs of intimate relationship with Keiran(maybe just me? not sure if they really do) because I'm getting quite confused of who am I gonna ship to the mc(I like the doctor best for him). because I liked harem a lot in the past(I still like harem) I tend to ship many women to the mc and probably Keiran is gonna end up with just one woman(well, as long as there is romance probably the book is gonna be perfect for me, just for me okay?)
Good work author!
The translation quality is overall good while I really like the story and the pace it travels on. The main thing is that I hope I could find more chapters soon.
The person who posted this clearly used MTL(Machine Translation) and it shows. It is barely readable.
You should really read this novel
69 nice
Some words words words and words I like words so that words are words is word it is words what words are words I word so words I don't words like words
Novel isn’t bad but it is basically a copy of several other novels of take disciples to get stronger. Now my complaints are the novel is redundant in a lot of its sentences. The examples of this are when it says the mc took bottles of mixtures to make a mixture that is poisonous and another blatant one was the enemy is very powerful and its defense is shockingly powerful
I dont know, feels a bit overcomplicated, can't bring myself to continue. Maybe it'll get better after the 40th chapter but so far, it doesn't do anything for me
The stories are good but I think the story needs a bit more development but the rest is ok keep doing a good job author[img=recommend][img=recommend]
Dose the MC have romance, Please someone answer me!..
Cover is misleading?
Interesting
Love your work
Recommendable
Keep up the good work Author
author here doing what all author do, read the book please.
