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The story truly reads like an anime/show. I love the MC and the growth of the characters so far. Although I do hope that Light gets a little more love here soon. The story isn’t exactly original but the use of these “titles” are unique in a way and I think that the author is getting better at painting nice vivid mental images when needed. Side character perspective are nice also. I’ve read a little under 140 chapters and I’m hooked. Only things I would like to critique but not really is for the auther not to over look certain detail like items, powers, or emotions when going forwards in the story. We remember everything that happens or doesn’t happen. Keep up the good work. Also please throw Light a bone lol
Well I am the author of this and I certainly will not tain on my parade. I believe plenty of people will do it for me. It's my first attempt at writing anything substantial and English is not my primary language so the vocabulary and grammar might be somewhat lacking. Anyway, if you enjoy it great if not not so great. If you can leave feedback of any kind I would be greatful. Regards from a fellow reading fanatic.
Are you the real author or a fake and if your real why are there only 35 chapters here there are 493 chapters on others sites or are you just seeing how it would do here good novel anyway
Hi, I am the Author.First of all, If you are reading this. you must be so bored that you end up being here.Second, This is a novel to practice me from writing contents and to familiarize me with the idea of writing.Third, I know the grammar is that bad. I'm working on it.Fourth, If you are here anyway, why don't you add this to your library and follow my own journey in getting better (hopefully). Who knows maybe you'll enjoy the story in the future updates.
Amazing start to the story! It left me wanting more after each chapter. The characters and world around them are so interesting. This is the type of book I'd go out of my way to buy and read over and over again. I'm excited to see more come from this. Keep up the great work!
Had high hopes on the novel. The synopsis was encouraging as well as initial chapters . But then things quickly went downhill. (dropped it on about chapter 30). - Unnecessary extras. What do I care about the name of each of the 9 fingers of the villainous organization and what they look like. What does it matter to me that one of them attacked the office of local heroes and got off with heavy losses. And moreover, I don't care about a detailed description of his fight with the hero Porcupine. - The weak emotional part of the work. In theory, given the circumstances of the hero and his ability, this should have become a pillar of the work. But no, this point is almost completely ignored. (The fact that this work is generally from a third person only makes the situation worse)- Battles... what a masterpiece(no)... the hero is beaten - he flies away from inpact (unscathered). Beats the enemy in turn. If the enemy is weak, this is the end. If strong - enemy enters a new stage of his strength and the cycle repeats ... (and yes, according to the precepts of grandfather Madara, no one starts the fight in full force). - Spoiler. I read the last chapters - the hero says that they defeated the gods and he himself became a god... it strengthened my resolve to grop the novel...- And yes, romance. I usually have both hands for it in any work... but here it seems more pulled out of the finger than anywhere else
The plot is unique and amazing. I'm excited how will the story will turn one. Although it's a little early for me to give my review. This story show a lot of promise, so i'll give it a 5 star as show of my support. I hope a lot of people can read it. Continue writing. You have a fan in ne
This novel is fun and engaging with the readers!We get to know what happened right at the beginning and author does a fantastic job in detailing the surroundings. It makes you really wonder what would happen next for MC and you are the one to choose his path!Amazing work!I recommend!!
Best novel, Definitely something you'll want to give a go. The plot is slow to pick up but as you read, the more interesting it becomes. Missing pieces from the puzzle that the author scatters throughout the chapters come together to form a beautiful story filled with beloved characters.
Translation Quality-4Stability of Updates-5(Can't really give anything else since this is trial read)Story Development-3(Story develops similar to LoHP, if you are familiar with the previous author you know where certain actions of MC are going to lead to.)Character Design-3.5(I like how the author decided to try a different approach to creating an MC. All authors try to make their MC seem clever but fails, here the author genuinely states MC is stupid and proves it with his action. However the reason I didn't give it full points was there are so many cliche character trope from authors previous novel.)World Background-4(Another unique world system of cultivation, that doesn't annoy you with the typical cliche cultivation path of meditating and power up.)Everyone come here expecting a power similar to LoHP or an MC like Zhang Xuan. However, this book isn't like that. The author is aiming for a completely different story. To be honest, saying that this book is the work of the same author as the library of heaven path will be the main downfall of this book. Don't expect him to be clever and smart like Zhang Xuan. Although there are hilarious events there and then, the MC is completely stupid. When I say stupid, he is sort of like the guy in your class who has the worst grade but is good at certain technical applications.The only thing that can be compared with LoHP is the cliche moments in the story where you know what is going to happen because you have read LoHP, such as him saying I am not going to do this, then few chapters later he does it and face slaps everyone who was *****ing about him.Translation quality is good so far, didn't see many problems.Character design- I have stated this above. Just remember when reading this, don't expect a clever guy. Zhang Xuan found the best way to use his cheat but this MC isn't like that because he isn't smart. The way he goes about to figuring out his power paves a way for a hilarious situation if you are new to reading books. However, if you are an experienced reader, you will find the jokes lame and annoying and sometimes wonder why the author made the MC so darn stupid.There are many used tropes from LoHP, but overall it's not too bad so far.World Background- This is a unique and different world, where the power system works very differently from the traditional cliche meditate and cultivate. In this world, one needs to be clever and be able to do insane calculations just to start 1st step of cultivation not to mention fighting opponents. MC's cheat just lets him skip the calculation bit of the cultivation and go straight to practise.
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