NeonSsX
I love the story!! I hope the 2nd part of the story come soon!!
where's the update?
Will storm be able to be happy again? Will she return home? Will she get another partner?
okayyyyy, an exciting read
must read the best story by far
the cliffhangers are on point, hindi na ako makapaghintay aksnjsksksks
been waiting for an update for a minute and then u came and just did one chapter like seriously...
Alurnya bagus dan menarik. Semangat dan sukses terus, Kak!:')
i like the story...u should update more
great set of reads a must have in your library
worthless filtg
Ngl... the story is interesting. And the fortunate lack of romance kinda reminds me of CFRC which is one of my faves.
My only complaint... is how open the arcs end. It feels like a story that’s missing its conclusion. No need to tell it until her death, but at least a "and she lived happily ever after," you know...
Regarding the arcs...
I like how she stayed single in the first arc. Even if he's obviously interested in her, I don’t think she’d be happy marrying him.
The ending of the second arc is also good. That together but not together because she can't love but can appreciate his company, and him understanding and choosing to stay beside her anyway... very nice.
The end of the third arc felt really abrupt. It didn’t even hint at what she'd really do... like raising her brother or her nephews or something...
Ohohohoho, she married for the first time! More out of friendship than love, but it is progress...
Slowly, you can see her evolving emotionally... that’s very nice. But this ending was also left too open for my tastes...
The first modern arc, with fantasy but modern, is very interesting. This time, the open ending didn’t bother me as much, mainly because I’m rooting for the second suitor... I can have an idea of how things would turn out if she wasn’t there, but I wish we’d get a glimpse of it like in other arcs... missed it more than a closed ending... xD
The ending of the doomsday arc was the sweetest till now. So cute...
I really like how she’s slowly learning about all kinds of love... learning to be a mother is beautiful...
I... don’t know who I imagine ending up with her in this arc... so... I vote for a harem... a shame it didn’t show how things would go without her.
It’s nice that she’s finally accepting that she can fall in love and that’s part of life. But I’d still like the ending to be a little more closed and less abrupt. Sadly, there also wasn’t a peek of how it’d turn out without her.
I... am slowly getting used to the "open endings"... I just imagine how I wanted her life to go on.
As a cat owner, I can totally identify with her in this arc. ? I believe that without her, the story would go overbearing CEO × small employee who unknowingly saved him. Also... I guess my problem with the open endings is me wanting to see more of her being happy.
Ngl, translating ancient arcs is dang hard. I can’t say she was a charlatan because she did practice internal energy and saved people. It’s the only arc that mentioned her passing away.
About the final arc... I can only say I’m happy for her... But I did want to know what she decided to do from then on... like... did she bind with a system? Did she become immortal? Will she go to other worlds? What will she do?
Normally, I dislike plots where people keep helping the MC all the time, but this one is an exception. She doesn’t hide behind those people but actively improves herself and lives her life. You can feel clearly why people would want to help her. She gives them a reason to want to do so.
Honestly, this is one of those novels where the more arcs you read, the more you start dreading the end of the novel. It makes you want to keep reading about her...
Ok... finished it.
All in all, apart from not falling madly in love, or rather, not being shown if she did, the only real problem with this novel is the open endings. Both the arcs and the novel end like that. It’s not bad since it’s obviously intentional... but it’s ANNOYINGLY FRUSTRATING to some people.
So be warned.
That’s the only reason why I give 4 and not 5 stars.
That aside, it’s one of the best novels, in my opinion.
BUT
The translation site is a piece of garbage. To the point, I’m thinking of going for machine translations instead.
The translation is good. But they fill the site with hidden ads so if you’re not careful while scrolling down, you’ll click them. And if you try to click the next button? Surprise, hidden ad covering it. There’s also an ad pop-up that covers 80% of the screen when you open a new chapter. Not to mention the full-screen ad that appears every few chapters. And to finish, there’s the constant ad at the top.
It’s so much of a pain in the ass that I’m really considering giving up reading something properly translated for machine translations. I can’t remember the last time the sheer amount of advertising pissed me off that much...
The novel is 5 stars,
but the translation site is 0...
