So I’ve read just up to 6-7 chap and it has an exciting premise with strong worldbuilding and thought-provoking themes. I believe with further refinement in pacing and character depth, it has the potential to be a gripping dystopian sci-fi thriller.?❤️
I came here from another novel of the same author and its good ?
Hi, I'm a huge fan of your work! I recently finished reading your book and was thoroughly impressed. I'd love to offer some suggestions on how to further boost your book's success and reach an even wider audience. Would you be open to hearing my ideas?
i read all free chapters and i must say this is actually really well written you weren't kidding when you said this was a better writtenso overall story seems to be pretty goodname might sound cliche but the story is pretty unique
a história e muito boa, uma leitura agradável!
Novel is good. Author is sometimes late but I love the story line and how author lewdly explains every intercourse scene and the characters describing is just awesome. Update it on more regular basis??
it is interesting and intense book it's full of funny moments and romance. their talks and actions are so good and heartfelt
yes I'm shameless rating my own story but got to bost it anyway if you have any questions feel free to ask
I have nothing else to say, I enjoyed reading the available chapters. It is well written and the pacing is good. I enjoy it.
It has a good start, Writing isn’t bad either.
I really like this book but please please finish this own and don’t drop it ??
For author- Delicious. Please continue to cook more chapters for me to enjoy. For others- It has potential, can't tell further than that since it's just till chapter 7, but it's worth giving it a try.