Overall nice story. Till chapter 10, the writing quality is nice and gets a bit better as the story moves on. Although the plot is unique. Although the development is not unique and the back story is a bit common, the plot progression is different from most of the novels.The world background and character development are nice.Kinda like the way that the MC ignores people completely when he is irritated by them. You don't get to see such distinct traits in characters too often.Nice work, keep it up Author San.
A shameless person here gives you 5* for the first review. Hope you like ita very interesting story, a lot of potentials. Hope you can make it stable update and try to not drop this storygood luck for you author, GBY ^^b
Recommended by someone, I started reading this just to pass some time. It’s actually a prologue to another novel. The story started off nicely. The flow was quite fast-paced, which is also a plus. Words chosen aren’t too difficult to understand either even if you’re a beginner to the English languge. The characters need a bit more of an in depth descriptions though, such as skin color, height, maybe eye color.Keep up the great work
zero creativity, rinse and repeat, generic tropes, lot of plot-holes and plot-armour, useless MC, brainless and foolish MC, .......................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Sounded like a good idea but mc is stupid and trusted people He knew were hostile to him and lost his system . Then the novel went the basic loli assistant which just made me more annoyed. Then after complaining about being used in his human like the mc decides to help people who simply want to use him in this life. Basically it’s A cool story as long as you don’t Mind averageness and an mc who continously dosnt care about getting stronger or protection and just about helping random people who seem disgusted by him.
didn't read but I 100% agree with Garresta this is the best title in the existence of titles, anyone who disagrees can fight me.??????
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A fun story whose premise reminds me of the great anime of the 90s like Starship Girl Yohko Yamamoto but with the flair and tropes of the 2010s! An excellent and fresh novel! I look forward to more.
Too early to give it a real review, but it gets 5 stars for being in the evil protagonist tag with my novel Devil's Rise. Keep up the good work new author.
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Unreadable.There's machine translation and then there's... whatever this is.The horribly cliched story doesn't do it any favors either. I couldn't make it past chapter 3.