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So just a heads up, this book ends earl at ablit 250ish chapters. Thr writer had 3 million + words but the editor cut it down to 900k apperently and the writer has started working on another project.
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Stopped reading at chapter 63 (almost all of the free chapters) and my verdict is that this story is.....annoying.Annoying in that the author is constantly teasing readers by not revealing the ML's status to everyone this whole time. The reason it's annoying is because a person that is as stupidly stubborn towards their own family as the FML exists. And she has a husband who has the power to fix all the problems, but loves her so much that he wants her to show everyone what she is made of. So the problem is that the characters are realistic, and that they've just been running around this problem for so long now, all so that the author can write in face-slapping events. IMO, since he wants her to show how great she is to everyone, it could still be easily solved by publicizing his status, and then giving her free reign over her own companies to spread her wings.Other than that, the story starts off a bit awkwardly in that it doesn't talk about his coming-up story, and although not perfect, there are very few grammatical errors, so it isn't hard to read. The world is a mix of modern day and fantasy, with mentions of modern companies and whatnot
Story was good until he had to save that girl, horrible translation needs better grammar, but Yeah overall a good story with a unique storyline.
excellent storyI love it, keep updating regularly, I can't wait to do the rest.good perssonage constructionupdate more remember please because I love this kind of novel
